Just Stay With Me Awhile - Comments

awwwwwww!!! I absolutely love this story. Zacky and Lili are so cute. and just love the perfect drama moments the funny moment every thing :) and i see that we have simular music likings which is freaking awesome :D but i would be quite terrified to get "Tommyland" advice lol :D

Buetiful :)

Honestly, until you told me that you had finished a Motley Crue story I would not have known that this has ended, I haven't checked my email in so long xD I should tackle that later.

But anyways since I've seen this story grow from the start and how Lili and Zacky both grow as character I thought it was wonderful, hearing it was the end of the story was a bittersweet moment for me, mostly because this is actually the story that got me into Avenged Sevenfold along with it's wonderful author.

Anyways, I think this story is just a gorgeously written story, with a gorgeous layout to match, the writing is amazing and the way you get into the characters shoes are incredible, you make them seem real and alive more then any story I've ever read.

I thought the ending was perfect, how he was honest with her and how she picked him over the others not knowing how the future would be and if they would last but doing it anyways. I thought the ending was perfect.

I'm really sad this story it over but at the same time I'm glad because I know that you'll move onto something else that'll be equally as wonderful =)

I love this ^.^
Really sweet ending (:

nice ending Love

that was cute! thanks for writing it!

Aghh don't make a sequel. Like you said, I love how this ended.

holy cow

In Chapter 17, Lili had to perform with Motley Crue, but she was meant to have a broken foot in a cast? It confused me a bit aha.
Other than that, this is a good story

Brian is getting on my fucking nerves...

Wise words from Vince.
True words from Vince.

Wow... Vince maned up! And he's got a really good point

oh my goodness! whats going to happen?! i can't believe she cheated on zacky. ahhh! update soon??

Oh god...

ooh noo.=/
That's aint good

I think lili just needs to stay with zacky! D: Brian interfered!

Oh No!!!!!
I wonder what'll happen.
Wise words from Mr. Sixx

oooh please dont tell me shes gonna go to brian? >.<

Looks like she needs to figure out where her heart really should be...

well my opinion is you should just make brian find a really nice girl because i think zacky and lily are a better couple