Circo - Comments

I didn't recieve an email for this... good thing I checked anyways.
Aww, no more airplane scene? ..awh.. da-damnit. D:
Well, that's okay.. I'm sure we'll have a lot more frerard-ness later.
I just love Josie. :cute:
She's awesome.
More soon, I hope!

I think I read a little of this somewhere in a far away land..
I'm not sure.
anywayyysss, I'm in love with this story right now, so I definitely applaud you deary C:
ahaha, of course the door is stuck!
maybe frank's alittle overdue and it's about time he gives in?
y/y? =D

This chapter made me giggle so much. :tehe:
I love how Gerard is just so horny, and the thing is, that we have no idea if it is for Frank as Frank, or Frank as a random available person who kissed him and is into him, even though he's in denial. I love that. :weird
I think it's awesome that they got locked in, too. I actually thought that Gerard was faking at first, but then when Frank couldn't open the door either, I was just like:
"That's convenient."

I'm looking forward tothe rest of the plane ride. It's bound to get even more interesting since it's such a long one. I hope they either stay in the bathroom or go back there together. It seems cozy.
I'm hoping that Frank will give in to Gerard's horniness soon, too. :tehe: :shifty

Awesome update. :arms:

Poor Frank, Gerard can just walk all over him. :tehe:
I love how you always make sure Gerard comes out on 'top' in the conversation.
He can always run circles around Frank. :weird
Plus you've set them up in an amazing situation, what with them being locked together.
Can't wait to see how you continue this!

haha i loved how different gerard was in this one

LOL!
I loved that one!
Gerard is so horny, I love it.
:XD
I, personally, think Frank should give in.
Ahaha.
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so basically...
I adore this story <3
I absolutely love Gerard in this story
he is just so...intriguing....=)
I just wish Frank's parents weren't so mean...=/
and I love how this isn't one of the 'Frank and Gerard meet one day - fuck the next' stories.
they are actually taking time to get to know each other
UPDATE SOON!! =D

I absolutely adore Gerard in this story, it's just gah - 'he has that effect on most people' :weird Mikey knows what I mean!
Even the mentions of him in this chapter, made me all attentive and wondering.
And Frank is like the perfect-almost-opposite to Gerard. Thank you so much for not letting them get together straight away! This wonderful lead up is everything.

So happy this story seems to be back in business. :cute:

I love this story!
Please keep updating!

I'm really liking Gerard's and Mikey's dad less with every chapter of this.
He's such an ass! They should have stayed with their mom, she shouldn't have let them get into that horrible lifestyle. They're bad parents, not particularly better than Frank's own.
It's sad.

I'm really falling more in love with this story every day, though.
It's so different and beautiful.
I've may have said it before, but the way Gerard's character is so mysterious and attractive is so fitting for the story. It's a perfect circus character.

Awesome update, I can't wait for more.

This is an epically awesome story =)
I can't wait for the next update!

Awhh, I really liked that one.
I love that Mikey knows about the... 'thing' between Frank and Gerard.
And I love that Frank is still hoping for his parents to contact him.
Yeah, I just love it.
:tehe:
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Please update soon- this story rocks!!! <3

Damn … I’m bummed. It seemed like all fifteen chapters flew by as I read them. I usually don’t do that when I read. Usually, no matter how good a story is I always pay attention to the scroll bar to see how much more I have to read before I’ve finished each chapter, but not for this story. When I finally did finish the last chapter and saw that there wasn’t a next update I could’ve cried. It’s all good, though, because now I get to leave you extra cheesy comment about how much I now adore this story. You are by far one of my favorite authors on mibba and that’s really not just to flatter you, although it would be nice if it did that as well. Your writing is absolute amazing and I’m kind of mad at myself for not reading this sooner, but in all honestly I didn’t think I would like this story as much as I actually do. I mean, I’ve read a few of your other stories, hence the one of my favorite author thing, but I really didn’t see how someone could make the whole circus setting fit too well. I do now.

The hard part about this comment, for me, is that I am absolutely terrible at trying to explain myself and explaining to people how much I like something. So if anything in this comment makes you roll your eyes, well I’m giving you a forewarning to expect it. So hopefully after you read this it won’t be something you wished you hadn’t read. :XD

The whole circus scene and all the people you’ve created to go along with it are absolutely brilliant. Especially the way you describe the performances. As I said before I wasn’t quite sure how the whole circus thing would work out, because I don’t think I’ve ever read a story about a circus, but the way you’ve described it gives me the perfect mental picture. I would be horrible at trying to explain something like that in one of my own stories, but I think you’ve captured the picture wonderfully. This is a big improvement from some of your older stories, it’s very easy to tell that your writing had grown in a lot of ways.

The next thing that really amazed me was the atmosphere behind the scenes of the circus. At the moment I’m at a loss for words at how to explain exactly why I like it so much, but it seems very realistic to me. If I had to imagine what it would be backstage of a circus I’m pretty sure that’s … somewhat what it would be like. I can’t say it’s exactly what I think it’d be like, because there was a lot of original input added into it and I’d hate to insult you by just saying ’yeah, could totally happen, way to go,’ because although I do find this story realistic, it’s got a certain personality about it that makes it very unique.

And holy shit, the characters. I would love to meet Josie. She’s one of my favorite characters by far. (Besides Gerard, that is.) Giving her an accent made her so much more lovable. And just her personality in general … I might not marry her, but I would definitely love to have my own Josie around. I love the way she takes care of Frank and the way she can’t hold her alcohol. Although that sounds horrible, it just fits her so well that I couldn’t imagine it any other way. On the other hand I kind of want to hit Gerard over the head with a stick … then hug him. His mood is always so iffy. You can never tell how he’s going to act, which why he’s my favorite character. I can’t wait to get a little farther inside his head. These last few chapters definitely made me happy for that fact we got to know a little more about Gerard. I can’t wait until him and Frank get together … in whatever way that might be.

I think I’ve written enough for this comment. Hopefully you don’t fall asleep while reading it. :tehe:

Thank you so much for posting this story. Sorry this comment had to drag on for so long.

Firstly – ‘I imagined his large muscles’ Gerard with muscles (!) oh my God. :shock:
Secondly – ‘Like I said: I’d never thought much about Gerard.’ Lovely ending for this chapter :cute:.
Thirdly – Please, please, please update soon, this story is too good for me to begin to forget, don’t let that happen!

Hey! Can't wait for the next update!
I was just wondering if Frank has tattoos and his piercings in this story?

Update! :brightside:
And Frank is fantasizing about Gerard :tehe:
This is awesome. I love how Frank is attracted by Gerard even though he really shouldn't be. When he normally wouldn't be.

:arms:

You updated! Oh thank God, I've missed this story like crazy!
It was great, I love how you ended the whole chapter with the line you started.
I await more :cute:

ILOVEZYOUMOARBECCA!
But, yeah, this chapter was short and sweet.
Frank is so blatantely attracted to Gerard, he's need to admit iiiiit.
For closure...

Yeahh, lurved it!
:tehe:
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I am a very bad reader, for reading and not commenting.
I hate to do that to people, partially because it makes me so angry.
Anyway, I did recc this in the P&R thread, so I hope that makes up for it a bit.
I adore this story, its one of a kind on mibba.
It's written so beautifully, it really could be more than bandfiction.
But I'm so glad you chose to use Gerard and Frank, because it fits their characters so damn well!
All I can say is you've really got skills, sorry for being a lurker, I promise I won't anymore.
This story just blows me away everytime, write more soon!