Ah dang!I thought rian finally got his girl! oh well=] I thought you ended it really well. and the exposure, if thats what you go with for the sequel, could be trick or extremely good. LIKE MUTANTS! yeah... i've got X-MEN on the brain... but yes, anyway, I sincerely hope you make a sequel. If you don't let me know so I can go cry about it. =]
as usual, i love it. im happy that Jazz FINALLY got her power... if she did that is. I think she did, because if she didnt it would throw off the who people with powers stick together thing. if expecting the unexpected means that she dies or something along those lines... then i'll just be sad. anyway!, like i said, i loved it. Dont wait so long to post... not that i can talk, some of my stories havent been updated since the beginning of October! thats just sad :l
Ahhh so happy there was an update! You have to warn me before you post the last chapter so I can start up Tension's from Jenny's POV and you can put the link in the last chapter! This way people can read it. Other than that, awesome!! Updates will take a while, but I'm content to wait!
=OOOO I just stumbled upon this this morning. I think I'm in love with you. This story is so good! I'm so into it. Please update again soon! AND YES! SEQUEL! lol =)
Ahhh, damn it there was a cliffhanger!!! I can work with this though. Imma need more though.
I'll have a new story up eventually. I don't know how long it will be, but it's going to be the Tim one. I know that much. I was thinking that as soon as I get the Alex sequel up on Buzznet than I'd start up with the Tim one on both just so they're in sync again. I don't know.
The other thing that I forgot to add on here in my comment before was about Jack's second power. So I read that... he can see 1 second into the future. I was wondering, did you get that from the movie Next with Nicholas Cage and he can see two minutes into the future and has to save the LA area from a nuclear bomb? That's what I thought of as soon as I read the 1 second thing. It's funny because I just watched that movie like the doy before I read this. Haha.