Tension's Like a Fire - Comments

I squeaked when I saw that this was updated. No joke. Haha. I was in my e-mail and I was like "Shit there's a lot of updates today... AHH!! TENSION'S!!" Haha. It was great.

That asshole dented Jenny's van using Alex. Ugh. She's gonna be pissed! But hey, it's just something else for her to work on! So she'll find the bright side in it.

Alex... I'm scared for him. It seems like he got hit the hardest. :'( Poor kid. I don't like that he's hurt. I didn't like that anyone got hurt, but Alex isn't walking and that's not good.

Damn it. All the girls got stolen. This is not good. I'm am scared for them. He's gonna steal their powers. >.<

Such. A. Good. Chapter. Uhhh, so worth the wait!

New layout is a win... though I thought the red went better with the whole fire thing. However with the new banner, the red would not work.

WHOA! HOW IRONIC! I'm sitting here listening to my ipod, and Hello Brooklyn came on. As soon as I read that sentence,I heard Alex's voice sing "Everybody knows there's a party at the end of the world." I got so excited that my eyes almost rolled out of my head! LMAO

Anyway, story's great so far, I'm almost done reading it. I'd love it if you kept on going! :)

Oh, and I believe I have to go make so edits to what I'm writing. Apparently the kiss that Jenny and Zack shared in the end of the chapter before was not their first? Must edit!

Excited as hell when I saw in my e-mail that this had been updated. I could have seen it a lot sooner if I had checked my subscriptions, but me being stupid I didn't.
Anyways, that was a good chapter. It builds. Zack <3

love it
my favorite story on mibba hands down
update soon

so...
zack and jenny fucked.
jack and sally fucked (i can't get over the blink 182 - i miss you and nightmare before christmas reference lol :P)
alex and jazz fucked. a lotta j's.
good update :D

i am so excited that you updated.
now i am going to tell you this chapter made me giggle like a school girl
when jack and sally got it on. =)
love it but you know that.

i really like this... it's original.

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!
I liked this chapter. It made me happy. Now I have something to go write about. Woot! I think I might be able to squeeze two chapters out of this! Pwn!

Zack is so sweet.

Just for the record, i'm a little disheartened that rian doesnt have a girl. Or does he and i just dont remember? But yeah, poor forgotten drummer! I WILL ALWAYS REMEMBER YOU!

ps,
thank GOD you updated, i love super power fan fiction.

i love this story soo much
i love alex and jazz there my favorite <33333
u should deff have jazz power be ice that would be awesome fire and ice
like how she gets really cold when shes scared and only alex can warm her up and how she can really feel when alex gets too hot that would be awesome like they balance each other out
update soon

Yay! Finally Jack and Sally : )
Loved it, update soon

i am in love with this story
plzzz update soon

Loved both chapter 19 and 20! Sorry it took me so long to comment.
Can't wait for the next update! :D
7 stars well deserved!! : )

...Grieving is self-pity, a personal little pity party that people never question. You’re upset because you’ll never get to see them again, hug them again, tell them "I love you" and you’re upset because you realize because as a human you are flawed. Not only is one of your flaws your mortality that also rears it’s head when someone dies but also the fact you make mistakes. Our greatest mistake taking every person we’ll ever love for granted. ... None of us are on the ball enough to realize tomorrow brings the unknown. No matter how many deaths you experience you’ll always learn to take everything for granted all over again.
God damn that was an awesome paragraph. It's good.

Hey this was good enough for a celebration to 7 stars! I predict that you will make it to 10 by the time this is over!
Thanks for whoreing out both of my stories. hahaha.

Wahahaha!!!! "Who would she date? Amelia?" hahahah!!!! Priceless.

Hooray for filler! Haha I do that sometimes just to make the chapter longer. It's always pointless and hard to write for me.
Bahahaha they work construction? That's hilarious. At least Jack can use his mind to lift things. Wouldn't want him to strain a muscle. :D

Wow, this story is so original, it's got me captivated, I love it.

New subber :)

What's the name for Jenny's power? And Zack would end up with her. It's more like you're reading the story, instead of writing it sometimes?