Skeptics and True Believers - Comments

poor delilah somebody needs to happen with tina
and when jimmy said he was filled with marshmallow goodness
i couldn't stop laughing
update soon
<3 michele

i dont know what to think anymore! first brian is an asshat and now he is acting civil. What are his intentions?!?! i need to know!

YAY!!! Syn is jealous! Wooooooo!
=)

ooh
syn maybe being brian again?
seems too good to be true

Yep, so i'm cheating.. but you'll like it. hahaha.

Brody's gone :( But it's okay... not even the distance between New York and Huntington Beach can keep that crazy boy quiet.. I know he'll be back... someday.. somehow... *sniffles*

Oh! When she walked into the Bowl-o-rama (which makes me think of The Simpsons..) and found Matt and Val in the arcade... this was sooo funny:

"Just about ten minutes or so," Val shrugged. "Matt's getting all pissy cuz he's losing."
"I'm not losing! I'm just a little behind is all," Matt argued in obvious denial.
"Aw shit! I'm so close to winning!" Matt whined.

&

"So, we figure out teams?" Val asked, walking down towards us with a very sullen looking Matt.
"I take it that she kicked your ass," I sniggered.
"Shut up," he pouted.

Matt is damn adorable. I want one just like him! :D

Awww! Jimmy made me sad... being all sweet and telling her basically that he missed her when she left. I love that he doesn't like Tina, either. Seriously, does anyone? I mean, if it really came down to it, I bet even Syn doesn't like her. hahaha.

He was busy with his beautiful blonde fiancée, having moved onto bigger and better things, clearly obvious by her generous bust size.

She put it so much nicer than I would've. She left out the best words, such as: Whore, skank and tart. Oh and as if the boobs aren't bought. They don't count if they're plastic!!

Mwhahaha! When Syn glared at Jimmy coz Delilah kissed him on the cheek.. the first thing to pop into my head was that song by Gin Blossoms "Hey Jealously".. actually, that song sums it up nicely just with these lines:

And you know it might not be that bad
You were the best I ever had
If I hadn't blown the whole thing years ago
I might no be alone

Okay, so technically, he's not alone.. but he may as well be. It's not like he could have any deep or real conversations with his bimbo... all she's good for is looking pretty on his arm. That song fits! hahaha.

Oh, I love how Sami and Rena don't take Tina's shit. They're smartass and sarcastic to her, rather than just sitting there and listening to the bullshit that falls out of her mouth when she's having one of her little temper tantrums. Those girls are awesome!!

Cruisin' World! I rule at that game... seriously. I used to be unbeatable when we had it on Nintendo 64.. Nobody could beat me! :D

I love how they were able to talk and be civil.. it kind of feels like no time has passed, except for them mentioning stuff in the past tense. They still seem completely comfortable with each other...

Hahahaha! Jimmy's cereal.. that's hilarious! I so want to try lucky charms.. we dont have them here.. =(

You made me laugh out loud at this:

"Cuz he's not filled with marshmallowy goodness like I am," Jimmy mumbled incoherently.

He's such a drunken dork! hahaha.

Well, things are just getting super confusing for both of them, aren't they? They're both still head over heels for each other, but there's been so much pain and anguish that they just can't see how they feel clearly. It's kind of sad.. because they do seem like they were the perfect couple before Brian went and fucked it all up. I suppose sometimes when he's looking at her, he's kicking himself for being such a turkey. Tisk tisk.

Okay, now that was a comment of epic proportions! Hope you enjoyed it! I look forward to the update!!! :D:D:D

gosh!
tina is such a self-absorbed bitch.:(
i don't really like her.

and why can't delilah just sign over the papers anyways?
she's making her own life hard. :(

<3!

tina's a skank!

Rawr Tina's a right nasty bitch. And wayyyy too clingy.
She honestly made the guys postpone practice so Brian could make sure her photo shoot didn't get messed up? Urgh. I really do hate her.

Loved the update though :cute:

syns new girl is a bimbo

IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!!
hope you update again!
more?
soon?
:D

i love it and i can't wait for more!!!
i wonder if syn feels the same way towards her
and at least they are nice to each other

Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
I'm really starting to think that Brian wants to mess up with her head so she will give up and sign those goddamn papers! >.<
That photoshoot sounds awesome, with the setting and everything =)
Tina is just stupid... Asking Syn to come with her because she was afraid Delilah was going to mess up her pictures...
Anyway, I completely love your story :D Congrats on the 9 stars, you deserve them!

JULIA!

I'm going to serenade you for updating. Are you ready? No? Okay. Get ready. I'll wait.

....

Now? Okay. AHEM!

Julia, Julia, oceanchild, calls me. So I sing a song of love, Julia. Julia, seashell eyes, windy smile, calls me. So I sing a song of love, Julia

That was for you! Coz you updated oh, so speedily! :D

So... she's still thinking about the kanoodling in the kitchen (by the way, that is the BEST word) of her aunt and uncles house.. well, I can't say I blame her. Even if he has no balls, he's still hot and knows how to make a girl weak in the knees with a kiss.

Now, that set? That sounded A-mazing! I want my bedroom like that... When I move over there and we open our fish and chip shop, can our house be like that?! :D You described that soooo perfectly. I could picture it in my mind and it was just awesome :) Loved it.

Argh! Stupid Tina had to show up and ruin her perfectly happy day... She's just a big ruiner! With stupid hair and a stupid face. Yes, that's right. I went there...

This bit made me want to vomit a little:

He nodded, stealing a disgustingly passionate kiss from Tina before walking over to the monitors that weren't too far away.

It also made me want to punch him. Can I punch him? No! Let me be a waitress who spills a jug of water in his lap.. making him look like he peed himself! Yes, that could work... coz then maybe his penis will freeze and fall off, then there's definitely no cheating problems!!

Ohh! When she finally told Tina that she was posing like a whore (basically), that was so priceless! And she did it so well and stayed completely professional, which just made Tina look like an even bigger ass! But I loved this:

Finally, I stood in front of her with my legs spread apart and started touching my bust line and legs in a very over sexualized fashion. I noticed Syn staring at me with a smirk on his face as I mimicked Tina's modeling, slightly licking his lips which caused me to drop my arms, rolling my eyes at his suggestive mannerisms.

HAHAHAH! Of course he was.. he wants her soooo bad. Coz he LOVES her... but is just too stupid. I stand by my earlier statement. TURKEY!

Now, I loved this chapter. I see why you were excited to write it.. it was probably my favourite so far :)

Btw, yes, I'm crazy.. I know. It's nearly 4am and I didnt get much sleep last night/this morning. My excuse. I'm sticking by it.

again another amazing update :-) I love this story soo damn much!

stupid tina
what a bitch

gasp!!! they kissed!!!
maybe its a plan?
well either way i loved it!!!
i can't wait for more
<3 Michele

ohhh, syn is a little mindplayer.
update soon (:

wow, that was intense. I def give props to her being able to stop the hotness that was forming between them two.

Mibba likes me again! But it is 7am so this comment may or may not make any sense....

So, the start was good. Loved the drinking margaritas at 11am and suckering Zacky into the fun. Coz who wouldn't be? The Beatles.. you nut. hahaha. Now I'm singing What would you do if I sang out of tune? Would you stand up and walk out on me? Thanks for that! hahaha.

Oh, Brody with his harmonica/prison thing.. that was hilarious!!

I busted out laughing when Syn showed up and answered her statement. I was actually caught off guard with that one... I mean, I kind of figured he'd turn up, but I didnt expect him to catch her statement. hahaha. He's such a bugger.

So she saw them and was right there, but they were too busy staring at random boobs to notice her... dumb boys. I like how Syn was all interested and surprised about the places she'd been.. but then he had to go a be a fucktard by saying she runs away.. he's such a turkey.

Though I loved this:

"Jeez Brian, why do you have to be such an asshole?" Zacky sighed loudly.

"It's not my fault!" he argued as I walked into the living room.

It's not his fault he's an asshole? Who's is it? Captain Planets? I dunno why him.. he just popped into my mind.

Then wow!! They nearly went at it right there on her Aunt and Uncle's kitchen counter!! That was so heated and very passionate.. very clear that man still wants her so bad. He loves her.. she loves him.. but he had to go and fuck it up. TURKEY!

I feel bad for her... but he obviously has some inner torment going on too. He said it was different.. coz she means something to him.. where as all these other "girls" dont. Not even Tina. He's kidding himself.

But he's still not having his balls back. No luck, chuck!

Okay, bed time. I've rambled enough. I love you my Team Awesome buddy!!

I wonder why Brian isn't telling her the reason why he cheated on her on their wedding night?! If he really wanted to get a divorce, he would have told her already >< moron!
Poor Delilah
Anyway, loved the update! :D