Brody is very funny, he's such a dork! I love how your chapters are a bit longer, it allows you to get a lot more out of the story in a chapter, keeping me on the edge of my seat!
I love you for updating this fantabulous story today/tonight!! Well worth staying up for! :D
I was laughing quite loudly at the part where Brody was hanging out the window playing air guitar and singing along to Rise Against... so funny. I could picture it well, too. haha. I knew I liked him for a reason! :D
That house sounds amazing. I want it. Now. We should live in that house when I move over there to open my shop... yes? :D Especially if Zacky is our neighbour! I would camp out on the back deck just to catch glimpes of him. Do you think he'd notice me wrapped up in blankets on a chair with an oversized hat and my binoculors? If he does, I'll just entice him over with a bottle of Jack Daniels... = p
When Brody called out her name and she froze.... argh! I would've thrown the sunscreen at his head! hahaha. He is not stealth at all. He will never be apart of our mission impossible plans... he'd blow our cover. Tisk tisk.
Awww.. when Zacky hugged the life out of her.. that was so cute. I'm glad to see he's happy to see her and not mad or anything. Coz I thought he and the others might be, cause they might see it as she not only left Brian.. but she left them too and just cut them out. Of course it was understandable to me, but probably not to them.
I can't believe Brian! He didnt tell them what he did! That mutherfucking assface coward! I hope he cops it now that Zacky knows what really happened... dirty lil bastard. He definitely hasn't earned his testicles back yet.
Ohh.. I can't wait for the next one! So excited. Love this and love you, dear Mario!!! :D
loved the update but I could tell that you were listening to "Are You In?" by Incubus when you mentioned the sea foam green, and then you mentioned Morning View.lol I know I'm weird like that, and it's my favorite album. not to mention I've been listening to nothing but Incubus for like 2 weeks straight haha
I love her new life! I want it... can you arrange that for me? I'll look after her life in New York while she goes and beats Brian with his guitar, k? :D
Brody is already a complete hoot. I quite like him right off the bat. Actually, I like all the tattooist staff . They all seem awesome! She seems to have her world all sorted... aside from being hung up on her husband... which is darn understandable. He is her husband afterall and he did do a number on her.
Then that damn P.I has to come in and just shatter her world with three words. Then proceed to just stomp all over the pieces of her world, by telling her that her husband wants a divorce. Assface!
Brian is now without his testicles. I cut them off. It was quite gross, I'm glad you didnt see, coz you would've been sick, but it was just the most fitting punishment that came to mind. Really, it's a blessing to him... I mean, now he can screw any and all wait staff he likes with no need for a condom =)
What a way to get your heart completely crushed. On your wedding day, no less. I'm just disgusted with him. As I would hope the other guys would be too. Although, that really does depend on what he tells them though, doesn't it? He could play it off like he's the victim and she just up and ran out on him...
Excellent start, my dear. The flashbacks of their relationship were fitted in perfectly and described just how they got to that day. Your discriptive style of writing blows me away so often.. you just keep surprising and amazing me with your talent.
There's no question as to why I am your number one fan, but if there was, this first chapter answers it. :D
yay! i can't wait to see where you take this. i'm already on the edge of my seat haha, and whoa, what a first chapter! can't wait for more! keep up your amazing work! i'm already in love with this. not even kidding!!
i effing love it. !!!!
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more soon please ?!?!?!
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I love all your stories. !!