I loved this :) I especially love the part when he smacked brendon with the dildo x) It made me laugh for about five minutes straight I also like the general style of the story. It never gets boring and you add humor very well, it's not like the typical, cheesy stuff.
Please, please, please tell me this is not the only chapter to this story. I would love to read more :)
Favorite part:Patrick blew me. I can understand why Pete swears by that mouth now. And he held me after I blew him, which is nice because Pete doesn’t like to do that. Patrick says it’s because Pete has the potential to fall in love with anyone so he has to keep certain distances. I always thought it was because I wasn’t Patrick.
:cheese: Wow, I really loved that. Made me laugh out loud :tehe: I liked that is was not too deep, but really honest. It seemed quite real, for a teenage boy.
The idea of you actually buying a journal to write this in is pretty cool too.
This is fucking incredible, I love how Ryan's so like exasperated with Brendon, but won't actually tell him and just keeps it back and wait for Bren to notice. Awesome :cute: