Winter Wakes - Comments

  • OH MY GOD YOU BETTER BE ACTIVELY UPDATING SUMMER SHADOWS OR I'M GOING TO CRY TO DEATH. ; - ;
    July 4th, 2012 at 08:55pm
  • OH MY GOD YOU BETTER BE ACTIVELY UPDATING SUMMER SHADOWS OR I'M GOING TO CRY TO DEATH. ; - ;
    July 4th, 2012 at 08:55pm
  • "One kid two rows over was staring wide-eyed at his notes, head reclining on his fist. It wasn’t the first time I had caught him in such a manner; I envied him in a way, the only classmate I had ever encountered who had the talent to sleep with his eyes open." THAT MADE ME LAUGH SO HARD.
    July 4th, 2012 at 06:34pm
  • Ch-chapter twenty four made me cry... ; _ ;
    July 4th, 2012 at 03:57pm
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    Wow. I love the summary!! It's so entrancing and...*shivers* The picture on top is amazing, too, so haunting and eerie :D Ooh! Okay - now onto the actual story :D

    Okay, so I absolutely adore your writing style. It's really elegant and it flows really well and it sounds like poetry almost :) (that's a compliment :D)

    I loved the ending - it almost made me cry!! :( I really hope you're writing a sequel - if you do, leave a comment on my profile, because I'll definitely read it!! :D
    July 4th, 2012 at 04:25am
  • Q A Q I thought this story disappeared because of the name change. I'm so glad the new Mibba helped me find it again! Anyway, since I haven't read this in forever, I think it's time I started from the beginning instead of wherever I might have left off at last.
    May 27th, 2012 at 12:16am
  • Wow, I just, I can't even...I can't even finish my sentence that's how much this story got to me. God, it was so wonderfully done.
    May 23rd, 2012 at 10:05pm
  • *tears* so beautiful i fell in love with this story can't wait for the sequel. This story should really be published i would buy it.
    November 19th, 2011 at 08:07pm
  • *tears* so beautiful i fell in love with this story can't wait for the sequel. This story should really be published i would buy it.
    November 19th, 2011 at 08:06pm
  • Got referred to this through a journal, and just thought I would leave a comment so as not to be a silent reader. You write very well for this website. I found your descriptions and use of language in particular to be very mature, so well done.
    November 1st, 2011 at 08:52am
  • I hate you for making me cry in my living room in the middle of the day, you horrible person, you wonderful writer you.
    Just kidding, I don't hate you at all!
    This was a very touching ending. Really. I also love how it ends with "hope." And the possible sequel looks amazing so far and very intriguing and I hope you'll devote as much awesomeness to it as you did the first story.
    I'm also rooting for you to get this published someday.
    Congratulations on your first story-baby, by the way! :)

    P.S. I think I've said this before but I want to say again that I love the songs you put at the end of the chapters. They've been a very welcome and constant addition to my playlist. So thanks for sharing them.
    November 1st, 2011 at 07:20am
  • I can't believe it. You finished it! Congratulations! I'm working hard on my own and completely understand! I believe the ending was brilliant and ambiguous for those hungry for more. Please continue on what you do. I believe you can do it. Kudos :)
    October 25th, 2011 at 01:12am
  • Just read this and it was absolutly amazing!
    October 16th, 2011 at 12:22am
  • Ngl I cried too. This was updated on my birthday and I can honestly say it was the best birthday gift I had gotten. I was surprised you updated so quickly! Anyways back to the story, my God. I can't believe he's really gone. I mean of course I knew it would happen but I always hoped.
    I really hope someone Simon's in his brother's body. I really hope so even though it sounds weird and impossible, I just need him to be =/
    October 15th, 2011 at 07:04am
  • BJ! *gives you a big hug* That was an utterly beautiful and haunting ending! I'm still in awe of your mastery of words, of emotions. I've said this before, and I'll say it again: you are my biggest literary idol. I absolutely ADORE your writing style, and someday I hope to be just as good. You put so much heart and emotion into each and every word, and I seriously feel like there wasn't a single scene, a single word, that didn't get your 100% attention and care and love. This story was absolutely breathtaking, and my absolute favorite story. :) I've learned so much about writing just by reading this, so thank you so much for writing such a wonderful story! I've been keeping up with it since you started it, so I'm also sad that it's over. It's like Maggie realizing that Simon's gone and never coming back--only this is coming back... IN A SEQUEL!!! That announcement made my day! :D Eep, I'm so utterly excited for that. It seems like it'll have a very different mood to Winter Wakes since it's set in summertime! I can't wait to read it, and best of luck! When you get this published, I DEMAND an autographed copy. :) Best of luck! I'll be (impatiently) waiting for Summer Shadows. (And don't forget about Whispers and Wishes! I really miss that story, too!)
    October 14th, 2011 at 05:50am
  • I hope Simon is inside Oliver's body. that would be such a lovely ending ;)
    October 14th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • I just want you to know that you are a fantastic writer and I have thoroughly enjoyed this story; it's the only minna story that I wait on bated breath to read. You craft characters so well and I can't wait until you publish them.
    October 13th, 2011 at 11:30pm
  • You made me cry! I dont know how to comment now...it was such a beautiful chapter! Such sorrow and emotional if Maggie, i could feel it all...and i want simon baaaack!

    I have to admit it was the perfect ending, the tone was great, it was good that you brought James Dreyton back, it was kind of like a resolution for him...i didnt realise he had lost so much until you mentioned it

    Aaaand new story!!! Yay!! Don;t worry, you take your time if writing it, it'll be brilliant =P I wonder if Simon will return...=)

    Thank you for writing such a wonderful story, i completely adore it!!
    October 13th, 2011 at 08:59pm
  • Amazing,its a great story and i have literally sobbed throughout the last chapter! I love this story though i did hope that may be just may be Simon and Maggie would be together but this ending is really fantastic too!! Congratulations on completing your story and i would be looking forward to the sequel :)
    October 13th, 2011 at 07:55pm
  • Wow, this story is just... overwhelming. I bawled like a two-year old =D You're an amazing writer, and I know this story will get you somewhere. I also admire you for finishing this. I have yet to finish any one of my scribbles of stories, and you managed to pull it off. Congratulations =)
    October 13th, 2011 at 05:51pm