A Dangerous Face and an Almost Illegal Taste - Comments

I rewatched the video the other day and I might be updating this story.

hey, i know it's a far shot, but is there any chance of this ever being finished/having any other parts added on?
cos i realy enjoyed it, and it think it would make a great comeback...
but i can understand if you don't want to, cos it's qite a long time since you wrote this, and i guess you've moved on a lot since (sorry, that came out sounding really patronising, i don't mean it like that... i'm just going to shut up now.)

susie x

more please this is amazing

wow. amazing story. I can't wait for the next part!

Chibi:

I just realized, I never commented the last update! How silly and rude and absentminded of me! I thought it was a LOVELY chapter, now that I get around to it....

My Flash Player finally installed, so I checked out your trailer. C'est pathetique de moi, but I teared up a little. It's like, really stirring! I'm sure it's an obvious answer, but who sings that song?

Brand New.

I just realized, I never commented the last update! How silly and rude and absentminded of me! I thought it was a LOVELY chapter, now that I get around to it....

My Flash Player finally installed, so I checked out your trailer. C'est pathetique de moi, but I teared up a little. It's like, really stirring! I'm sure it's an obvious answer, but who sings that song?

Ahhh I love this!! It's so different!

I cannot believe I missed a chapter.

It was perfect. The confrontation between Mikey and Gerard was excellent, well written, and it fitted in well with the whole story.

Gerard is suck a total betch, I just want to slap some love into him, so he and Ry can make babies.

Keep it up Dru, I love it
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♥

Dru;
I'm once again floored by your work. This is by far my favorite story of yours. The pairing is perfect, the mood is delightful, and the plot is fantastic. Five stars, dear. Update, only when you can.
-MaryF.

I think this is probably my favorite chapter. It was so right. I loved this part

"He’s a fuckin’ kid.” Mikey snapped. “Have you lost your mind? Has your dick finally taken over your brain completely?”

I don't know. It just made me grin. I love how Ryan's all unsure and stuff. Its cute for some reason.

Alexx-VIOLENCE;;:

This was fucking AMAZING.
Seriously, I am wow'ed at the moment.
I love the pairing aswell!
Please, More When You Can!

Bden's hot, but I have eyes only for Ryan.

Anyways, back to the topic at hand.

I loved the thing about "dancing with cancer." Mostly because I'm afraid of cancer.
And I love it when people talk about how writers talk like they write--my mom tells me that a bunch.

And then I loved the whole tour bus deal. Because I just love the Panic! boys like that. And of course, they're always BETTER when you write them.

And this line:

“He’s a fuckin’ kid.” Mikey snapped. “Have you lost your mind? Has your dick finally taken over your brain completely?”

I love maternal-sounding Mikey. It's my favorite. I love how he's not really that much younger than Gerard and he's taking like...control of the situation.

Anyways, I'm so damn happy you finally updated this thing.

The Way:

Btw, this might be totally spam, but...

I love Brendon. Especially in the I Write Sins video. This has no connection to your story whatsoever but I have you and Marlee to thank for my now-growing Panic! addiction. Haha.

Brendon Urrrriieeeee. [/teenie spam]

-giggles-
Well, at least you'll get a Ryden fix from me.
And her, soon enough.

Btw, this might be totally spam, but...

I love Brendon. Especially in the I Write Sins video. This has no connection to your story whatsoever but I have you and Marlee to thank for my now-growing Panic! addiction. Haha.

Brendon Urrrriieeeee. [/teenie spam]

Imagine!

I check my mail and I see two updates; one for this and one for Sick Boy. What a Panic! filled day. xD

So, yeah, review...

Fuck you, Bren. Go back to being a stupid kid so I can hate you. Couldn't have been more expressive than that line.

The part where they're playing poker and the concentration on the ring tone was kind of tense, but kinda funny, in a subtle way. For some reason, I kept laughing, especially with the Used song for Gerard. Genius. :lmfao

I think I get the same feeling Ryan does when he thinks, or is near, Gerard while I'm reading. I dunno; my stomach turns and my throat dries up and my palms get clammy. Maybe it's psychological, but that just explains how well you write this. So effing... realistic and relateable.


“Dance with cancer.” Gerard snorted. “No wonder you’re the writer.”

Made me snort/laugh. Again. Sounded just like something Gerard would say. And the paragraph that followed, with Ry being awkward and insecure, was a perfect... shall I say, unspoke counter to what Gerard said? Haha.

Oh Mikey. Oh Ray. You must see the... utter glory of RyGee. You will, someday. >>I could picture the arguement in my head. With Ray being all demanding, Mikey yelling and Gerard hissing at them. So eloquent, Dru.

This didn't have as much... err, action as chap. 5, but I still loved it. Very, very much.

i love this story!

Amazing. That is really all I have to say.
Simply amzing.
I have to say that this is my favortie story, I'm not lying.

I was waiting for this all week too. Anyways, there are no negitive things to say. The update was amazing like always. I can't think of what else to say. Sorry. >.<

I really liked the update!
I've been waiting.
This is one of my favorite stories!
Really good job!

I wish Gerard's text hadn't interrupted Ryan's thoughts.
My favorite lines:

"voice tinted with disbelief."

"with an emotion the older boy couldn’t place, but didn’t like. Something that wasn’t quite pity and not exactly concern. Fuck you, Bren. Go back to being a stupid kid so I can hate you."
I like Ryan's thought, especially.

"Brendon was watching Ryan through lowered lashes. Spencer was watching Brendon. Jon was watching Spencer watching Brendon watching Ryan."
That made me smile.

""...It’s a video game. We each have a controller and I kick your ass....""

"They were like two different neighborhoods in the same town."

"a bit more accusatory...than worried."