A Dangerous Face and an Almost Illegal Taste - Comments

LMAO That is serious dedication!
I liked this chapter a lot.
Ryan should probably tell them if they haven't got a problem with it.
-_-
Especially since it's making everyone so tense.
*pokes Ryan*
Like that's gonna make much difference.
Seeing as it's fictional Ryan.
Anywho...
Really liked this chapter. We got to see more of what Ryan was thinking, which is obviously a fantabulous thing.
I'm gonna leave now.
Before I can waffle anymore. :D

Dru, your dedication is incredible.

The way you delve into Ryan's thought process is awesome. He's naughty though for lying, it's ok though, coz you said my name again (:

I wonder how Gerard would fuck. - that line blew me out. Something about it was "mysterious"-ish and intriguing.

The tension between the guys its just delicious. I love it.

<33

Now that I seem to be damned anyways, I'll leave a review from hell.
(Remember I just got back from Warped, the actual thing, and my computer has eight minutes of battery left. So this might be shit)

The man’s feelings were apparent, sexuality surrounded him like a cloud of smoke—or maybe that was the cigarettes.

This was Warped. Seriously. I just went today and that was it. Like...I have a headache 'cause of the cigarettes.

And oh my, oh my, oh my, it was perfect. I think I'll reread it again in the morning without a headache.

But it was great. Truly.

druscilla; insain:

The Way:

You and Fish are like, in the process of making me fall desperately in love with Ryan Ross. :P

She made me fall in love with him, too!
Damn her and Sick and Sain.
...
A good damning, of course.

I feel damned...
Uh oh.

Because I feel random, and I enjoyed Chap. 4 so much, I shall describe it as 'scrumtrilescent'. I was gonna go with 'tastiful', but it didn't convey the right amount of enjoyment, so 'scrumtrilescent' it is.

I agree with ZooZoo Magee.
Except for the whole repetition thing. I try not to be redundant, although I fail at it quite often.

Anyway, love this story, keep up the good work!

And yes - SERIOUS DEDICATION!

Noooo! Ryan don't be mean!
I like Jon. Jon Jon Jon. [in a name-repetition mood, I am]
I liked this chapter. It definitely explored Ryan's thoughts/thought processes more and the relationship of the boys in the band.

kelly elly elly:

I am completely in love with this story, and most of your writing. I'm in the process of trying to read/comment them all, but it's taking forever. There are a lot!

93. Currently. ;)

kelly elly elly:

Anyway, this story is very original. I haven't read one like it yet. Most of the stories people write on here are exactly the same. :D

Thank you so much.
:D
I always try to be different, whether it's tone or point of view.

I am completely in love with this story, and most of your writing. I'm in the process of trying to read/comment them all, but it's taking forever. There are a lot!

Anyway, this story is very original. I haven't read one like it yet. Most of the stories people write on here are exactly the same. :D

Catastrophic Hymns:

And now, you're making Ryan cuddle with Brendon - and you KNOW what that does to me. Ahahaha.

Would you believe me if I honestly said I wasn't even thinking of what that would do to you?
[Not having slightly underlying thoughts of Ryden would be utter bullshit.]

ILU2 Bden!
-snugs-

I'm addicted to this story, now.
I want to see what happens. And you taunt me with little itty peices of your next update, but I can never see the whole thing - which just makes my insides go all to hell.

And now, you're making Ryan cuddle with Brendon - and you KNOW what that does to me. Ahahaha.

I love you're writing. I've always loved how much emotion you can put into just a few simple words.

I love it, RyRy.
ILU.

The Way:

You and Fish are like, in the process of making me fall desperately in love with Ryan Ross. :P

She made me fall in love with him, too!
Damn her and Sick and Sain.
...
A good damning, of course.

Mr.Whirly!:

There's something about this story. I can't place it. It makes me laugh, yet isn't necessarily a "comedy" story.

That is exactly what I was going for.
Exactly.

Perhaps I didn't realize it had been updated because it just was updated.

I didn't realize this was updated. I'm glad I finally did, though. There's something about this story. I can't place it. It makes me laugh, yet isn't necessarily a "comedy" story. GAH, I don't know what I'm saying. What I do know is that I am completely in love with it.

Has been updated.
About 1600 words.
:D

I so adore your writing.

Really, I do. Description is always just right, the narration flawless.

Your characterization is magnificent. Gee is such a dick, and you write it so well.

You and Fish are like, in the process of making me fall desperately in love with Ryan Ross. :P

I'm sorry I can't leave a better review, I'm incoherent today.

Just wanna let you know it was great, and I'll be looking forward to more. 8)

I definitely adore the description of when Gerard looks at Ryan through his cigarette smoke...that's something I enjoy doing to my boyfriend. That, and blowing smoke into his mouth during kisses...maybe you could get Gerard to do that to Ryan? Anyway, it definitely is a cute story, one that I'm certainly going to suscribe to.

Geriya:

You and your story rock harder than Gerard when he thinks of a sweaty Ryan.
- Excuse my innuendo.

No need to be excused.
;)

*stares at Druscilla in awe*

Can I cry at your feet?

Because this story - the word choice you grace the page with, the way Gerard is a dick who craves a boy, the steady way the words flow together to create this beautiful story that could be considered one of the best stories ever to have blessed the fanfiction world of Mibba - cannot be described in a thousand words.

In case you didn't get the gist of this comment:
You and your story rock harder than Gerard when he thinks of a sweaty Ryan.
- Excuse my innuendo.