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  • Kyra

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    The ending made me cry! :(
    I'm waiting for the sequeal. ><
    January 18th, 2008 at 09:57pm
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    :D im really happy you guys enjoyed this story. t'was a pleasure writing it. As for the sequel i'll try and email everyone when it gets out
    January 17th, 2008 at 08:42pm
  • BombingwithBillieJoe

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    I admit, I was hoping for a cliche happy ending. I cried. This is/was such an awesome story!!! I'm sad that it's over, but I am curious as to what the sequal is about.

    You are such an amazing writer. You should get published someday, seriously.
    January 15th, 2008 at 09:14pm
  • whatsername924

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    Wow I cant wait for the sequel!
    Amazing job!
    January 15th, 2008 at 03:02am
  • carelistar

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    what an amazing ending-- the whole story was fantastic.
    cant wait for the sequel!
    January 15th, 2008 at 02:35am
  • Elegant Rubble

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    I'm glad it didn't have a happy ever after ending, I always hate those, their so predictable and cliche
    Can't wait for the sequal, you must let me know when its up!
    January 15th, 2008 at 01:04am
  • LC_01

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    omg i cant believe it's done...ive been with it for so long. I loved the ending i know alot of people are probably wishing that they ended up together but...ugh the ending was so perfect! i cant wait for the sequel!! =)
    January 14th, 2008 at 03:56am
  • Whatserekim

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    aww i really thought that it would end happy.....
    i freaking love this story, i've been reading it since it was on gsb and i still love it!
    January 13th, 2008 at 10:51pm
  • Cherry Road

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    The Write Words?:
    WOW.

    What a stunnning end to an amazingly brilliant story.

    I agree with a lot of people here... you've written a story that is funny, romantic and dramatic whilst at the same time maintaining credibility with the plot and characters: something which is incredibly difficult, but you've perfected it!

    Thank you for taking the time to write one of the best stories i've ever read.

    CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL =)
    Exactly what I was going to say.

    Damn it, you almost made me cry.
    And I've been crying my eyes out this weekend, so that's saying something.
    January 13th, 2008 at 07:06pm
  • The Write Words?

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    WOW.

    What a stunnning end to an amazingly brilliant story.

    I agree with a lot of people here... you've written a story that is funny, romantic and dramatic whilst at the same time maintaining credibility with the plot and characters: something which is incredibly difficult, but you've perfected it!

    Thank you for taking the time to write one of the best stories i've ever read.

    CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL =)
    January 13th, 2008 at 05:59pm
  • XxGregKillsxX

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    It's over :( Great story! Can't wait for the sequl.
    January 13th, 2008 at 03:19pm
  • wish_i_was_adie

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    awww, such a sad ending. and i'm sad that it's over. please write more soon. please pm me when there's a new story
    January 13th, 2008 at 07:55am
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    Thanks for all the compliments! The last chapter will hopefully be the best. I'm really excited for the sequel and have already began writing it.
    January 6th, 2008 at 01:31pm
  • Whatserekim

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    oh my god! i love this story so much, it's like you can picture the whole thing as you read it thats how good of a writer you are.

    please update soon!
    January 6th, 2008 at 01:29am
  • pastulio

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    fucking seny. I feel bad that tre wont take her back but its her own fault.
    I love this story. i love you!
    January 4th, 2008 at 02:25pm
  • Kyra

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    Sequel? DUDE, I LOVE YOU!

    This is such a sad story, I'm actually crying...wow, your writing is so believable, and it's amazing how easy it is for the reader to picture the whole storyline in their head like a movie--like real life. Wow...

    I have to admit I feel more sorry for Tre. It keeps switching. It's sad for both ends, and I'm glad you're able to capture that. Most people would despise the one who was doing the cheating, and usually do, but you've managed to show the side of the culprit, and it's unbelievably sad.

    Thank you for such a great story, and Happy *late* New Year.
    January 4th, 2008 at 06:52am
  • Cherry Road

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    Silent Riot:
    holy. shit.
    ohmygod.
    that was definitely intense.

    more soon please!
    Yes Mhmm, I completely agree.

    You know what I like about your writing? I think I've finally figured it out. xD You make everything so believable, so realistic....when I'm reading this story, I'm completely immmersed into the action and I don't for once break my focus and think, "Oh, that part shouldn't have gone there." or "Nooo...Tre wouldn't do that."
    You're great at that. :D
    January 3rd, 2008 at 02:35am
  • ohhaielise

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    holy. shit.
    ohmygod.
    that was definitely intense.

    more soon please!
    January 2nd, 2008 at 01:22pm
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    Happy New Years guys, and thanks for the comments and support. Now im even more motivated to end this story with a bang
    January 2nd, 2008 at 01:00pm
  • carelistar

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    amazing chapter-- cant wait for the next one and the sequel...
    happy new year!!
    January 2nd, 2008 at 09:07am