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  • TheAwkwardTurtle

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    i feel so bad for Seny... :(
    i really hope things don't fall apart for her
    September 3rd, 2007 at 03:46am
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    Thanks for the feedback! Yea, it was difficult to write this chapter because I am also pro life. Only a few more chapters to go til' the end though, so I'm going to keep my mouth shut. Hope everyone enjoyed it. 8)
    September 3rd, 2007 at 02:53am
  • Kyra

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    Wow, that's so sad. :( You could definitely feel the emotion expressed in Serenity's side of the story.

    ...oh dear, please don't say Jose is going to be having a relationship with her! D=
    September 2nd, 2007 at 03:59pm
  • LC_01

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    mixed feelings on this one....im pro-life... but my personal feelings aside..well written =)
    September 2nd, 2007 at 10:27am
  • mike dirnts bass

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    aww thats so sad
    write more soon plz!
    September 2nd, 2007 at 04:34am
  • pastulio

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    so..... i love this story. I remember reading it a long time ago on GSB. and then my acount got cancelled and then i found it on mibba. Its awesome cuz on gsb i only got upto the New years chapter. love it still.
    August 31st, 2007 at 12:00pm
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    my pleasure ;)
    August 27th, 2007 at 11:12am
  • KariRaquel

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    Make_my_lover_stay:
    :D An update is in the works. I was on a hiatus, but am back.
    Clap : thanksss
    August 27th, 2007 at 09:35am
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    :D An update is in the works. I was on a hiatus, but am back.
    August 20th, 2007 at 12:55pm
  • KariRaquel

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    Elegant Rubble:
    still loving it!!!!
    and waiting for an updatee!
    August 19th, 2007 at 02:20am
  • Elegant Rubble

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    still loving it!!!!
    August 12th, 2007 at 07:35am
  • TheAwkwardTurtle

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    love it!
    July 30th, 2007 at 03:29am
  • mike dirnts bass

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    ohh wright more i love it!!!!!!
    July 25th, 2007 at 08:23am
  • Kyra

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    :( Aw, that's so sad! You definitely know how to get emotion across.
    July 24th, 2007 at 04:40am
  • The Write Words?

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    awesome =) that ending was so sweet - it just says something about the both of them: they both atleast feel some remorse!

    cant wait for more =)
    July 23rd, 2007 at 08:18pm
  • KissMeDeadly80

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    i love this story so much! great job! : )
    July 23rd, 2007 at 10:18am
  • Make_my_lover_stay

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    Probably tomorrow night
    July 23rd, 2007 at 02:13am
  • Kyra

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    When is the update?
    July 23rd, 2007 at 01:41am
  • The Write Words?

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    gripping stuff. how interesting would it be if it was Billie's? Shifty
    July 10th, 2007 at 10:50pm
  • libbey crocodile.

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    Oh dear. This could be bad.
    July 2nd, 2007 at 02:51am
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