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  • RescueMe

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    This story is genius. It's friggin' good enough to be published. It FELT like it was published.

    I seriously can't get over how well this was written. >:O
    April 2nd, 2010 at 05:10am
  • Poke Your Sunburn

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    GAH! :D I finished this one too! I'm on a rolllll. Man I'm raping your stories with comments aren't I! This is a very sweeeet story...although you could have added one more chapter like...a year into the future :D But oh well...it's perfect. I honestly would have murdered Marylin if she said no to marrying Will at the end...I wouldn't know how I would possibly succeed to murder a made up character...but I would!

    Anywaaayyy...I'm leaving to some place for vacation tomorrow...So don't be expecting comments from me on your stories any time soon...well..till tuesday that is...aww don't cry! But don't you worry... I'm printing out the remaining stories I have yet to read! I'm a faithful reader, see?! :P Jussst kidding.

    Ciao!
    March 30th, 2010 at 06:38pm
  • towers

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    Still as awesome as the last time I read it.
    March 29th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    too cute
    March 29th, 2010 at 02:14am
  • xxxbreelynn

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    *DIES

    Too cute. :3
    March 29th, 2010 at 01:08am
  • radio active.

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    Aw, I loved the ending. (:
    If this happened to be a movie, it'd be my favorite.
    Normally I don't go for chick flicks though.
    (I'm a reader, not a watcher.) (:

    I'm happy with the ending, to be honest.
    And I think it was perfect.
    You did an absolute amazing job on this one!

    I can't wait to read The Legend of No One.
    (:
    March 29th, 2010 at 01:03am
  • Classy Not Classic

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    oh.my.gosh.
    Amazing<3
    March 29th, 2010 at 12:33am
  • Maisweetlove

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    Ahh I loved that ending! Great job <3 :)
    Couldn't imagine a better way to end this amazing story. :)
    March 28th, 2010 at 11:47pm
  • wake.the.dead

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    If this story was published as a book, I would buy it in a heartbeat. <3

    Thank you for letting us tag along on Will and Marilyn's journey :]
    March 28th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • Breathless Tallie

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    Cute ending :)
    March 28th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • permanentdeclaration

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    This story was so amazing. I can't believe I haven't read anything else of yours yet! Great job :D
    March 28th, 2010 at 11:15pm
  • tweak;

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    I love this story.<3
    Yet I'm so close to tears. ):
    March 28th, 2010 at 10:46pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    Oh the wonders of alcohol
    March 28th, 2010 at 03:51am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    They KISSED

    Then it was ruined

    What happened?
    March 28th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • painting flowers

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    Oh dear, that phone call cannot have been good...
    Thank you very much for updating. =)
    March 27th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • Classy Not Classic

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    This is an absolutely amazing story :)
    By the way, Fiance is spelled wrong. It only has one e.
    March 27th, 2010 at 01:04am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    awww
    March 25th, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • Hypocritical

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    Aw, that is so cute and sweet, I love it :)
    March 25th, 2010 at 09:47pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    cute
    March 25th, 2010 at 09:09pm
  • xxxbreelynn

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    Awww.

    Poor mare.
    March 25th, 2010 at 12:17am
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