I would be starring at Matty too! He's got nice musckles... I want to kill her parents for not even asking her if she was ok. Jimmy's awesome! lol. Hehe Johnny's pout is adorable! Which girls? and what class are they?
For someone so young you have such an awesome talent! Don't give up on your writing. You're a better writter than a lot of writers I know of!
I have to say I think this may be my favorite story from you, but it's just starting out so I can't make my judement yet. It's gonna be awesome though.
I also loved you getting more into her background
cant wait for more!