Your Smile Never Fades - Comments

  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Interesting to learn his past. Explains why he's there. haha.

    Wonder what the brawl's about...
    March 17th, 2009 at 08:28am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    Great update...so glad they talked!
    cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter!!
    March 17th, 2009 at 07:03am
  • Jenocide_OmNomNom

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    LOVED IT! It's so fucking amazing! And I eralized the lead chick is Alaina Beaton! I fucking adore her! She's so pretty!
    =)
    Keep updating!
    March 17th, 2009 at 06:16am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    Hell Yes Matt! Man up!!! lol.
    Holy shit his past was bad! But it just makes him even more resisitable! lol.
    You killed Shady Jeff? Wow...And Justin's a rat?! lol That's awesome! lol.
    Oh shit! The whole camp! Damn!
    March 17th, 2009 at 06:14am
  • finallymoving.

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    Yay Matt time!
    Haha more soon XD
    March 16th, 2009 at 07:54am
  • jess.taylor

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    I really liked it :)
    March 15th, 2009 at 07:05pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    I'm slightly disappointed that she didnt get bitched out and was sort of coddled, but I understand why. haha.

    Part of me hopes that Matt isn't completely all apologies... I mean, sure, he does need to apologise, but so does she.. so yeah. haha.

    Look forward to the next one.
    March 15th, 2009 at 02:27pm
  • lottie2427

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    I just started to read this and I'm hooked! You're a really good writer and I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings =]
    March 15th, 2009 at 01:52pm
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    I really am loving this!!!!!!!!!!
    I can't wait to find out what Matty says to her!!!!
    March 15th, 2009 at 03:21am
  • VengeanceIsMine

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    wonder what matt did hear!
    love this giirl !
    March 14th, 2009 at 11:32pm
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    omg!!!
    please update soooon
    i wanna know if they like eachother ;] lol

    ps-omg! finally! A7X THIS FUCKING WEEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D
    March 14th, 2009 at 10:54pm
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    omg!!!
    please update soooon
    i wanna know if they like eachother ;] lol

    ps-omg! finally! A7X THIS FUCKING WEEK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D
    March 14th, 2009 at 10:54pm
  • Ri0t

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    "And I started to think about Kyle and all the fucked up sit I’ve done and I just…crashed." ^
    shouldn't it be shit and not sit
    March 14th, 2009 at 10:40pm
  • PrincessShortie75

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    Matt deserved it, but at least he checked on her. He has good heart lol
    March 14th, 2009 at 09:20pm
  • PrincessShortie75

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    Matt deserved it, but at least he checked on her. He has good heart lol
    March 14th, 2009 at 09:20pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    cant wait for their talk!
    March 14th, 2009 at 09:16pm
  • Lost Cause

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    I could so totally make Matt shake in his boots. lol. And of course I wouldn't bitch her out, it wasn't her fault and I'm just a nice person like that. Matt, on the other hand, deserved it this time.

    Speaking of Matt, I can't wait to see how their conversation turns out. It's gonna be very interesting, that's for sure.

    I loved the update, and I can't wait for more!
    March 14th, 2009 at 09:09pm
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    Yeah Tara is too nice to bitch her out lol. I know she's never bitched out me even when i broke a promise.
    Her bitching out Matt would be a funny thought! lol.
    It's good that she told Tara everything though.
    March 14th, 2009 at 08:53pm
  • finallymoving.

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    I liked how you put in a chapter where it was just her thinking about her past and realizing how she has messed up and all that. And Matt wasn't her imagination. He lurvvveess her. =]
    More soon!
    March 11th, 2009 at 05:09am
  • cherry_lip_gloss

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    it seemed very slow but i enjoyed it
    March 10th, 2009 at 09:50pm