It was about a quarter of the way through this chapter when I was going "what could he never forgive her for" and I had been pretty convinced there was nothing unforgiveable between them. And then it hit me and I spent the rest of the chapter going "oh shit oh shit oh shit" because I knew. Then it was confirmed. And I'm really heartbroken. For them and for me because there's only one left.
Holy fuck, I didn't see that coming. I thought she would say she fell in love with Alex too or something. That was quite a shocker. Only one left? I'm going to miss this story.
You just broke my heart into itty bitty tiny pieces. Good Lord. How many left now? Two? I can't remember what the count was last chapter. All I know is it's ending soon. But that's okay, because I know what's coming next. :D Gee willakers, I'm excited. I also love how Tom is taking care of her since Oliver is gone. He's the best. I also like that, like Curtis, he's not afraid to call Oli out on his shit. Now I just want to know who that guy was.
Oh, and just so you know, ever since I made that stupid Philadelphia comment the other day, Philadelphia has been everywhere. There were about twenty references at least to the city just last night. It was ridiculous.
HOLY SHIT BRO. I havent been on the computer in like 28-65865 cos of exams- and so i just read like the last 4 chapters and holy fuck they're epic. first off, im fucking jealous you saw all those bands at download, secondly, im laughing rather loud at the way you wrote SJ. haha, she sounds like the biggest slurrry. thirdly, your new house sounds like a riot :) and thats all i can think of to say. anywho, i say you should update soon! :)
love this story :) and super jealous you got to go to download, I had friends playing it and still couldnt manage to get the time off work :( can't wait to read more! x
have fun at your thingy, you deserve it for that one. :D it's killing me that we're so close to finding out the secret and I have to wait FIVE WHOLE DAYS for it. I may just die over the weekend. haha.
OH MY GOD. He loves her, she never stopped loving him, he'd stand in a blizzard. I AM SO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT THREE CHAPTERS. WHAT THE HELL DOES SHE NEED TO EXPLAIN? God, this is amazing. My friend was trying to talk to me all during this chapter, and I kept yelling at her to leave me alone because I NEEDED TO READ IT. Firstly, what the hell was I thinking? Then what was ALEX THINKING? I'm so excited. Omfg, bro. Like, gah.
I had a bunch of really trivial things to say about this chapter and I intended to ramble, per usual. But then I got to this part “I’ve never not wanted you”
“And I’ve never stopped loving you”
And I forgot everything else. Because these two lines are perfect. To-die-for perfect.
This is sooo good. I just read it all in one :) fucking awspme And for the chapter before the last one u posted, there's only One person I can think of that wears lavander t shirts and waistcoats and goes by the name of Alexander William........(Gaskarth). I am praying to God it's him and I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!
Shit, almost the end? Fuck. What am I going to do? I'm going to go through withdrawls. Is there such thing as fanfiction methadone? I'll need that. Gah.
I like SJ. She's straight forward about her come-ons. It's the sheisty ones that cause the most problems. But maybe I like her because I know she's in the past part of the story. Dunno. Also, go Curtis for being a good guy.
And no computer? You must keep writing! You're one of the good things about Mibba, which is basically a sea of girl-meets-boy-in-cliche-way-blahblahblahdrama stories.
Part of me loves SJ just because she's such a massive skank. But she's telling him like it is, and I think that's pretty awesome. And I love Curtis for letting Oli have it! I can't wait to hear what Verity has to say. AND FOR PARIS AGAIN, WOOOOO! But seriously, only four left? :( And no computer?! This doesn't make me happy.
And this ended up being very short. But how much do you need me to say before you understand that I fucking love it? :D