Love At First Flight - Comments

Cool. x] This sounds different from the rest of the entries I've read.

Commented. Thanks for the contest link and word count.

I just realized my last comment doubled. Haha, oops. Anyways, I love this story. I was beginning to wonder what had happened to it. Like I said before, I think this is wonderfully written. The way the characters are just make everything seem so realistic. There are stories that you know are stories, but this one seems so real. You really have a talent for drawing the reader in. I look forward to the next chapter! ^_^

Wow...I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon please???

Gah I lovers it! Like seriously, it's awesome.

I can't wait to see tons more updates of this :D

Wow, the lack of comments on this story is disturbingly shocking. I guess because it isn't fan-fiction people have a general avoidance. Well, apparently they would be missing something great if they thought like that. This is a great piece of writing; much better than the same old things you often see floating around. I have been looking for the past half hour for something that wasn't fan-fiction or a 2nd grade writing level, and I'm glad I finally found something worth reading. The description is quite good, and it's a beginning that draws the reader in. I'm quite interested to read the next part of the story. Well done.

Wow, the lack of comments on this story is disturbingly shocking. I guess because it isn't fan-fiction people have a general avoidance. Well, apparently they would be missing something great if they thought like that. This is a great piece of writing; much better than the same old things you often see floating around. I have been looking for the past half hour for something that wasn't fan-fiction or a 2nd grade writing level, and I'm glad I finally found something worth reading. The description is quite good, and it's a beginning that draws the reader in. I'm quite interested to read the next part of the story. Well done.

wow it's good keep updating please!!! :D