Cover Up - Comments

this story is a whole new world , wow youre amazing :)

So the sex started off consentual but then he raped him...what was up with he text say, why? Was that heather about the talent show on not turning up or something else??

Omg I love this
Even though I started reading it after u rewrote it
Still love it
Can't wait to read about wat happens to marylin, spencer, and heather

I never read this before you started re-writing the last bits, but from what I've read it's really good!

Keep it up, I wanna read the end now XD seeing as I never did before

Spencer, Spencer, Spencer.
I am going to freaking kill you.
A simple apology is NOT going to let you get away this time.
No way, dude. No way in hell.

Hmm...
Well, I think you've shown a clearer insight on just how badly Marilyn was hurt as compared to last time.
And yeah, you've made Heather more emotionally attached.
I don't remember the parts before chapter 44 too well, so I don't know if you did this or not, but I think if Heather and Marilyn's relationship was shown since the start of their re-friendship then it would've helped a lot more...
'Cause I mean, putting in an emotion like this into one chapter all of a sudden doesn't make it sound real, y'know?

Anyway, still, good job on the rewrite. :3

poor marilyn D;
this was such a heart breaking chapter! spencers such a jerk!
updateee pleassee

oh shit.
spencer sounds so much meaner from what i remember...
i think. o.o
spence, what the hell?
blegh. i need answers. u.u
and answers = updates, so...
update soon? D:

YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!
poor marilyn, he's so pitiful, spencers such an ass :|

Good plot:) I think it would of been better without so much side drama. Also with less sleeping around.

I reallly likes this story. It was really good. But i'm not going to lie, the end made me sad and disappointed and stuff. But the rest of the awesomeness canceled the end out. XD
xox

Yippee.

i love your story:)

=O
OMG!
I can't believe Spencer raped him!
Asshole!
I also can't believe the story's over.
=(
I truley do love it lots and lots.
I'll check out the sequel!
(Y)^_^
<33xx

hey, I just read all 50 chapters in one go.
strangely addictive...
I think it's brilliant (obviously, or I wouldn't have just read it all :P)
yeah, keep up the writing (Y)
I feel lucky only finding it when it's all finished though -
I hate it when I'm really into something and there's no ending
I'll most definitely read the sequel, when I have time
this is the first proper story I've read on here! just joined...
anyway, I'll stop rambling...
unpredictable ending, an enjoyable few hours spent reading
cool :)
I should really have been revising though :P

holy crap you finished it!!
i was a sad ending... still awesome though!
btw i cant find the link xD

Holy crap. It's over. I don't even know what I'm going to do now. ;] But it was a totally awesome, ah-mazing ending... LOVED it. It was like... closure, sort of. If that even makes sense. I don't know. I can't wait for the sequel.

That was an awesomenesstic (yes I know very strange word but I really don't care because I'm tired but still oddly hyper) ending to you wondernessly rockin story ^_^
I shall most defintitly check out the sequel and read it ;)
Since I will most likely love that story too, I guess you probably haven't gotten rid of me yet :D
Well then most probably talk to you later than chicka ^.^
~Tala~

Aww =[ I an very sad. =[ It was a very good story!!!
Also I'm the first one on page 18!

great ending and damn go mari and spence with the fact that mari is awesome and spence is still an ass but hes trying to get back on the good side

oh my! :O
Drama~~~