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  • Space Juju

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    this is sad... like they don`t love each other anymore?
    please update soon!
    April 7th, 2009 at 11:48pm
  • Jormungandr

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    Hmm... I'm going to state the obvious. Spencer is an ASSHOLE. But at the same time I sort of feel bad for him, a little. (Is that weird?) And... ohmigosh, poor Marilyn!!! I mean... wow. I definetly did not expect any of THAT.

    And, by the way, I'm totally bummed this is almost over. And totally excited for the sequel. ;]
    April 7th, 2009 at 11:27am
  • cyansunday

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    It can't be almost over. I too addicted! This was a good chapter.
    April 7th, 2009 at 08:47am
  • Rachel Screams Rawr!

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    brilliant story
    but now it's going bye bye *waves*

    ♥Rachel
    April 7th, 2009 at 07:02am
  • hessicusz

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    *happy sigh* i just love when i come online and find like, 5 new updates to a great story like this :D
    i am sad it's almost over, but happy there'll be a sequel :3
    April 7th, 2009 at 05:18am
  • shawnyxpanda

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    srsly, everytime i see my name on that list i smile. :]
    this was a great update. make me saddish. :[
    April 7th, 2009 at 05:16am
  • xxxfwankiexxx

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    oo sorry i havent comented the last few chapters! yikes. i cant believe its almost over but im glad that there will be a sequal! :)
    April 7th, 2009 at 04:46am
  • ShadowWolfDagger

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    YAY I got you addicted to a song! hehe ^_^
    Another song by Aiden that is really good is - Cry Little Sister
    That song is from the latest Lost Boys movie :)
    ;) Will you be writing a sequel to you awesomely wonderness story? :D
    ~Tala~
    April 7th, 2009 at 04:30am
  • Kite Flyin'

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    It makes me happy that he's not really forgiving Spencer... I don't know why, but yeah.
    April 7th, 2009 at 03:26am
  • Alice Verney

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    very cute update and damn didnt see heather cheating as well but what comes around goes around
    April 7th, 2009 at 03:15am
  • RFarley1991

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    Please Don't Leave Me by Pink is a messed up music video, which would explain how Spencer is messed up too.....but the updates have been really good, i'm so sad that it's going to be over though, but i also can't wait til the sequel! :D

    -Rachel
    April 7th, 2009 at 03:01am
  • lustbloodbeauty

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    I just started reading this story a few updates ago but I like it. I always like to try and give advice on people's writing, so I would say that for this story you should probably talk a bit from Spencer's p.o.v. just so you can give your readers an idea of how he is doing after what happened and his reasoning behind his actions and feelings.. Other then that grate job! :D

    (suggestions totally optional)
    April 7th, 2009 at 02:56am
  • lyriquement votre;;

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    NAY! I ist not dead!!!
    I almost died but me computre was broken and needed fixing!!!

    OMG!!!!! Ahh!!! poor spencer... he lost at zee game 'o baseball... sounds like my school's team... but we never win...
    April 7th, 2009 at 02:42am
  • lyriquement votre;;

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    Sorry i haven't been on in a bit. LOVE the updates tho.
    And now... HOLY SHIT!
    BAD SPENCER!!!!!! =O
    April 7th, 2009 at 02:17am
  • Miss.Bryant

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    Aww poor little Mari. He is too cute to be raped. But then again most of my characters are too but I make them get raped anyway. ^^. I hope everything turns out right in the end! I'm sad it is ending.
    April 6th, 2009 at 11:18pm
  • Space Juju

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    holy shit man! haha
    Spencer raped Marilyn? AHHHH!!!
    soory for my lack of comments...
    but anyways update soon!
    April 6th, 2009 at 10:09pm
  • ShadowWolfDagger

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    Your chapter wasn't crap, in act I found it to be awesomeness...like always ^_^
    Still want to hurt Spencer though, but GO Mariyln or standing up against Spencer ;)
    Don't ask why but I was listening to this song and it sort-of-kinda reminds me of your story; Aiden - Die Romantic
    ~Tala~
    April 6th, 2009 at 09:00pm
  • Kite Flyin'

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    Yay Mary!
    April 6th, 2009 at 08:48pm
  • shawnyxpanda

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    awhh.
    poor Marylin.
    i want to punch Spencer in his fucking prettyboy face.
    arghhh.

    have fun in NY.
    April 6th, 2009 at 08:31pm
  • shawnyxpanda

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    Yay, again I'm in the list of comments. :]
    I really do love this story. I feel bad for Marilyn. Bad Spencer. D<
    April 6th, 2009 at 08:31pm