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  • lyriquement votre;;

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    YAY!!!!!
    LOVE it!!!
    March 2nd, 2009 at 01:23am
  • lyriquement votre;;

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    This is really good!
    March 2nd, 2009 at 12:10am
  • therightout

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    what?! no bueno!
    that's totally suppose to be Spencer feeling him up, not connor!
    ooh... loving the update. :D
    March 1st, 2009 at 11:44pm
  • Alice Verney

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    damn his mom must be that good to do that
    February 28th, 2009 at 04:33am
  • cyansunday

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    The family chapter made me smile.
    February 26th, 2009 at 06:59am
  • Alice Verney

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    cute update and no problem
    February 26th, 2009 at 01:13am
  • SomethingEdge

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    I find this story quite intriuging
    February 25th, 2009 at 01:33pm
  • therightout

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    dude, I love this story. It's epically amazing dude!
    I totally subscribed. XD
    keep up the good work man!
    February 25th, 2009 at 07:50am
  • Alice Verney

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    poor marilyn
    February 24th, 2009 at 10:06pm
  • andicantspell

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    ohh. nice. : D

    my comments fail. XD
    February 24th, 2009 at 11:28am
  • don't hesitate.

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    Very Nice Twist
    Thanks :D
    February 24th, 2009 at 07:40am
  • cyansunday

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    Very Nice Twist
    February 24th, 2009 at 07:33am
  • Alice Verney

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    this is really adorable so far
    February 24th, 2009 at 06:40am
  • cyansunday

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    I don't think that the description of Spencer or how M was staring at him was unnecessary. It builds character. I've used that same scenario or similar ones in many of my stories to build the character. You're doing fine.
    February 23rd, 2009 at 07:05pm
  • andicantspell

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    : D i like this.
    February 23rd, 2009 at 07:08am
  • cyansunday

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    I can guess where this is heading and I like it. I feel bad for Marilyn though, his phobia and all.
    February 23rd, 2009 at 12:16am
  • cyansunday

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    I like it. I really really like it. Please write more.
    February 21st, 2009 at 08:08pm
  • hey there ace.

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    i really like this story so far. (:
    totally subscribing. :D
    February 21st, 2009 at 02:38am
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