Cover Up - Comments

i love this story :D

Oh la laa, where has this story been hiding from me? It's hard to find original slash these days, especially those that are well written and have plots that make sense.

You’re a very nice person, and you smell insanely good right now. <-- Gotta try out that pick up line some day, though I think it won't work for me. :mrgreen:

Pink. Stickers. Rainbows. Unicorns. Butterflies. Glitter. SHIT. My shoulder pads were covered in what was probably nearly all of Lydia’s sticker collection. <-- That line made me crack up like there's no tomorrow.

More of this goodness soon? :cute:

I must say... I don't like Connor very much. He gives me the heeby geebies.
I just made myself sound like I'm from the '50's. Ugh!
Anyway, ohhhhhh, Marilyn is between the two. What shall happen?

this is amazing. my only advice would be to make the chapters a bit longer.

it is indeed gonna be along year for both boys

uh oh, I feel the tension is going to get hot in that classroom.
dang, stuck between the stud and feel-um-up boyfriend.
only trouble can come from that. XD

AWESOME!!!
... and awkward.... XD
Can't wait for zee next one!!!!!

This story is really slow, but I like it that way. It makes me feel like I'm in the story with them. Very nice work.

I like this alot.(:

dude, Mary's got no luck what so ever!
he's having the most bogus life ever right now.
yup yup.
:D

I like how real you make this story. The characters actually feel like people to me, and that's rare with a lot of stories out there. I mean, I feel as though I could walk to the local highscool and find these exact characters. I love that. This story amazes me.

Hmm, I'm definitely finding this story interesting =]
Keep it up<3

ooooo.... poor Marilyn...
that's gonna be pretty awkward...

I'm loving Mr Burr
but AP Physics scares me... actually, regular physics scares me XD

Uh oh! Trouble ist running amuck (did i spell dat right?!?!?!) avec the girlllll O.O

he should learn to paty attention more and i have a bad feeling bout the chick

dude, he shot Einstien. O_o
I feel a trouble a brewing with the Spencer and that girl.
oh well, the more drama the more crazyness to the story. XD

"Yeah she’s a bit morbid, but I love her."
I love that line XD
YAY for updates!!!!!
=D

oooh, maylin's getting some.
who would have thunk it? XD
lovin' the story, keep it up.

So... I had just come across this. I wish I found it sooner. I love it. You write wonderfully, and it makes me smile. Not to mention the fact that Marilyn is so fucking cute (I'm talking personality wise, duh!)!
Hm... I think there was more I was going to say... Oh, well. I love it, and that's all that matters to me. [[:

Very nice. It seems a little out there for the aunt to be acting like that, but some aunts are like that. And it seems a little out of character for Marilyn to be so trusting of her, but then again he's your character, not mine...I feel like I've overstepped, but...it's just my thoughts. Sorry for the long comment....till next time...