I seriously loved the last two update :] You did a wonderful job with everything, from coming up with the storyline to the actual writing. I literally had a tear in my eyes when I was reading because it was that good! I am sad to see this story go but happy to have such an amazing story to come back to and re-read!
Loved it, loved it, loved it. Fuckin LOVED it!!! Best story I have ever read. Though how could it not? It was very well thought out and displayed great words that would draw any reader in. this is not a regular fan fiction. This shit should be published! :)
Wow so she finally was able to finally to move on. I feel so relieved that she got to see her sister on last time. Too bad she doesn't remember the conservation she had with her sister. I am happy that she and Matt are together. Man her parents are still the same, sucks but at least she has Matt and her friends. Well I love your story and I very much look forward to the new stories you will make!!!!! XD
OMG WHAT AN AWESOME ENDING TO AN AWESOME STORY! Usually im pissed when a good story ends (not saying this isnt good its amazing) idk i just reeeaaalllly loved it! and i was thinking the same thing when riley said it took for her to get hit by a car for matt to tell her he loved her. and im sooo glad she's finally at peace with lauren thanks for such an awesomely amazing spectacular story !!!!!!!!!! miyah
Oh my god. Way to make me cry like a little bitch!! That was really sad, but I'm glad Lauren was finally able to make her forgive herself. Damn, this was one of my favorites on the site and now it's over :( Great ending, though. Tell me if you start any other stories
Holy Crap, that was sych a beautiful ending... I got a little teary-eyed at the end. I loved this story, and your writing style, keep up the writing and I can't wait to read more from you. :D
*stands up* *claps* this story was creative genius it was everything I thought it would be and so much more you were able to convey every emotion with an intensity that a lot of famous authors out there can't even do thank you for writing this thank you for creating this world thank you for being an amazing author it was a great pleasure to read this story
Oh my god her dream made me cry. The conversation Riley had with Lauren was very heart-warming and loving. I can't imagine what I'll feel and how I'll be dealing if I ever had to lose any of my sisters.
When Matt sang to Riley, I cried there too. The song fits so perfectly with this story, it's almost scary. How you set up the story fits so well, it's breath taking. "I give my heart to you, 'cause nothing in this world to you."
I swear your goal is to make me cry at random intervals here. They finally admit they love each other! And the ending was beautiful, absolutely beautiful.
Before, I read your status update about your grandfather...I know you're probably tired of hearing this, but I'm sorry it happened. No one should have to deal with the sorrows of death. It isn't right for the mourners to go through that much hurt. There's not much comforting words I can say to you. I've dealt with a death in my family, but I never knew that person enough to cry or feel anything. But you know what, at least your grandfather isn't suffering anymore. I don't know if this helps you, but I hope it does. Sadness isn't good for anyone.
wow. the end. finis. I can't believe it is over, but I loved the ending.
It took a lot of time and mistakes for Matt and Riley to realize their feelings for each other but it was definitely worth the outcome. I had so many 'aww' moments during the last two chapters, they are so adorable together.
Lovely story dear. It was a long road (60 chapters! woohoo.) but well worth the journey.
The scene with Riley and Lauren was beautiful. and the scene at the cemetery was touching as well. I really enjoyed reading this story, so thank you for writing it and for continuing to post long chapters. as you know, long chapters are my favorite. :D
I also wanted to send my condolences for you, your grandpa and the rest of your family. I also recently lost a loved one, my cousin lost her battle with lung cancer. Stay strong, remember the good times together and celebrate his life, because as so fittingly put in your story, 'the memories will last forever.' <3
im literaly in tears!!!!!!! that was so beautiful!!!! you dont even need a sequel!! that was perfect!!!!
Im so happy shes alive! That chat she had with her sister was really nice, im glad she doesnt blame herself anymore, And im also real damn fucking glad that her and matt are together!! Only took and entire freaking story lmao :D
I read both chaps in less than 30 mins lol I was about to go to bed since its like *looks at botton right corner* 2:08am but then i got 2 notifications for this story and i was like "MY BED CAN WAIT!! IM FUCKING READING!!!" so yeah,
your an amazing writer!! cant believe its done! Imma miss this story!! =(
Great job and I loved the update :]