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  • stary_night_blossoms

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    i effing love this story!! Please update soon :)
    September 12th, 2009 at 02:21pm
  • John W. Lennon

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    Words cannot explain how much I love this story (:
    You need to update very very soon
    September 12th, 2009 at 09:35am
  • JGeo

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    I laughed at the starting of chapter 12
    The same thing happens to me
    September 12th, 2009 at 07:11am
  • buttaflykissz

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    poor poor jason i wasnt expecting that but great update i cant wait for the next
    September 10th, 2009 at 05:05pm
  • darling draco.

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    Holy crap! Ha, I feel like a ten year old when I say that. Anyway- Jason got Erin pregnant? Woah. This just keep on getting better. :)
    September 7th, 2009 at 11:57pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Bad, bad Jason. What a guy...
    September 7th, 2009 at 08:50am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    aaaaaaaaaaamazing - as always :)
    September 7th, 2009 at 12:50am
  • laureneva

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    good finish to the chapter. i'm glad jason didn't throw a chair. THE* chair. and a glance can say so much - you captured that well.

    enough praise, i see your head growing, ;) xxx
    September 6th, 2009 at 01:06am
  • John W. Lennon

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    Can't believe I never saw this story on here!
    I've just read all 23 chapters and I'm totally hooked
    I went to click on the next chapter, and it wasn't there and I was like D:
    This is amazing. Original, funny, sad, real.
    I love it so much, so you have to write more extremely soon.
    September 5th, 2009 at 07:11pm
  • laureneva

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    what can i possibly say. i'm gobsmacked. which isn't me. you know i ramble. but, i find myself stumped with these two. adolescent angst indeed.

    You've captured their passion perfectly. a pull that neither of them can deny, not even between heated words of an argument. Although, like the foggy heart sketched into the bus, i fear that it will drip away and just leave a faded stain in rachel's heart.

    I wonder what Tristen is holding on to. what part of her is she keeping from rachel? arms through heated sheets isn't the words that rachel needs to hear.

    As always, i await more. so many doors open in my head right now.
    xoxo
    September 5th, 2009 at 09:40am
  • onesweetlove

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    read all 23 chapters of this story today. please dear God update.
    September 5th, 2009 at 04:42am
  • sunset of my sunrise

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    Love the update :) The ending was kind of cute :) Can't wait to see what happens with them!
    September 5th, 2009 at 04:41am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    i love this story so fucking much!!! Cant wait for more :)
    September 5th, 2009 at 12:08am
  • darling draco.

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    Wow, I'm surprised by how much I like this.
    I don't normally read slashes.
    I wonder if Tristen actually has feelings for Rachel, or if she just misses Zoe.
    I hope it's not the latter.
    Anyway, this is an extremely well written story. I can't wait for the next update.
    September 4th, 2009 at 10:35pm
  • buttaflykissz

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    whoa intense! i wonder what will happen next
    August 29th, 2009 at 05:38am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    that was cute and hot at the same time :P Love it
    August 29th, 2009 at 12:32am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    awesome.
    August 28th, 2009 at 06:59am
  • UrStorySucks

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    I love the new updates.

    I don't want to stop readinggggg.
    August 28th, 2009 at 03:08am
  • stary_night_blossoms

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    i fucking love this story - please update more often i miss it :(
    August 27th, 2009 at 01:15pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    No, Rachel, you don't know for sure if it was Zoe she was speaking to!

    You write so real that it still messes with my mind. Talented girl, you.
    August 27th, 2009 at 06:14am
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