Sunshiner - Comments

Just happened to come back to this story and oh my god, I still adore this one. It's so beautiful. Thanks for writing such a magnificent story! If you'd publish it, I'd buy it! :)

4 years and this is still fresh in my mind. I feel like a child again seeing this page. I'm thinking of reading this again haha <3

I know the last comment on this was about a year ago but i just wanted to let you know that i'm sitting here at 12:30 in the morning crying over your story. It was beautiful and just absolutely wonderful. The second to last chapter where you described their last moments together... it was just heart breaking. someone very very close to me has cystic fibrosis and this story hit home a bit. your story moved me to tears and i just wanted to let you know that you're an amazing writer and this should really be published. i hope you become an author and that you write more beautiful stories.

I'm in shock. And awe. And I canny comprehend how amazing that story is. Like... Oh my lordie.
This seriously needs to be published. Everyone in the world should know canadace and kaseys story. This is such a fantastic book- you are so talented!!!

Okay. I have to start out by telling you that this story... Ive read it before.. Probably while you were still writing it... And one day, I remembered it, and I looked for it. It took me 3 months... Searching every bookmark, every subscription, and every mibba history I've opened. And I finally found it. And I have to tell you, 3 months was worth it. I loved Kasey's and Candace's characters. It just shows how imperfect we are and we do face the fact that were dying. We see people die everyday but to avid readers, when you get attaché to characters, it's like you feel it... As if you're close to the person who died. Gaah. This story made me cry, and I tell people about this story all the time... My friend's mom has even battling cancer for 3 years now and this reminded me of it ... Anyways, you really should get this published, and you're an amazing writer. And Gaah! I can't get over Candace's selflessness in a way that she accepted and urged Kasey to move on... And Kasey... An amazing man. Don't we all hope that men like that still exists now? -.- lol

Thank you for sharing such a beautiful story.. I laughed a lot(and cried a lot too) while reading it. My only regret is that I did not find it sooner. And finishing it wayy too soon!

Holy Shit. Everyone's comments about this story being amazing and you being a good writer is soooo true. This is the third story I've read of yours and I'm amazed. You've got a fantastic ability to write, you should seriously consider being published. You're my favorite.

Holy Shit. Everyone's comments about this story being amazing and you being a good writer is soooo true. This is the third story I've read of yours and I'm amazed. You've got a fantastic ability to write, you should seriously consider being published. You're my favorite.

COMMENT 800 FUCK YEAH

Okay...wow. I found this story on ProjectFiction, and I am truly in awe. This story gave me butterflies, made my chest tight, and I couldn't stop reading until I read the very last word of this whole story.

The story made me laugh at some points, and other points, it made me want to cry horribly. This story was both beautiful and heartbreaking. The message within was just as beautiful as the story.

Your writing is absolutely amazing. I have never been so impressed and affected by a story on Mibba.

Best read Ive had on here :) Sort of reminds me of Stargirl by Jerry Spinelli; “She was illusive. She was today. She was tomorrow. She was the faintest scent of a cactus flower, the flitting shadow of an elf owl. We did not know what to make of her. In our minds we tried to pin her to a corkboard like a butterfly, but the pin merely went through and away she flew.”

Oh my gosh. Can I just say that I read this entire story today and I just balled my freaking eyes out at the end! It was a beautiful story with an equally beautiful message. Never stop writing, you're truly amazing at it.

Oh my god! I love love loved this story!! You're an amazing writer. The story was well writen and detailed, I loved it! The end made me cry and the story made me laugh. I love how the story was from the point to Kasey, and it didn't switch back and forth back and forth. I liked the plot and how they only saw each other every summer. I loved how you described the town and everything! Omg I loved it!

K so this story is on PF's frickin' romance fiction list. You knew that. I just found that out. You're again, fuckin' amazing.

This story was really good. The writing is incredibly good. I have to admit that I cried a lot. Hehe. It was so sad, but I loved the story and one of the best I have read ever... =)

hey so i was listening to my music and i just wanted to let you know that this song September by Daughtry reminds me of this story soooo freaking much that i cry every time i think of either one<3 just letting you know. and im prolly gona post this on the other story and on your profile cause i think its important you know this<3

something you missed: chapter 16: "several of the silvery leaves were scattered beneath my feat."
i believe it should be 'feet'?

:( i just finished this now and i'm soooo sad. it's literally the best and worst story ever! i absolutely loved it but i hate that she was dying, i know that basically was theee plot, but still :( haha anyways, i love your writing style and i'm gonna check out some of your other stories

I think I cried almost throughout your whole story.
So many emotions and thoughts cramped into this. Your writing is unbelievable and I still get goosebumps when I think back to the way you, with the simplest words, described the surroundings and the characters that we really don't know that much about. They're mysterious, but I think that's mostly because the story takes place in Dayton, where they can escape their home-home for a while.

I agree with the other commenters: this should and could be published, I'm sure about that. I still have a huge lump in my throat and I had to take small breaks in between the chapters to dry my eyes and sigh miserably! Yes, yes, I'm very dramatic, but this was... so, so beautiful. You made me realize that dying may not be as bad as we think it is. Death can be beautiful...

Oh, and the ending? Magnificent. He's writing her story, and now, she isn't forgotten - I mean, I'm pretty fucking sure that I won't forget this story, ever.
So thank you for hours of joy, chills and sadness that will make my mind wander for months and months ;)...

I'm glad that you've published other stories so I have something to do now, haha. It's going to be hard to read other stories when you've put the standard so high!

Um, wow. Okay, just, wow. This was lovely, and vivid, and amazing. It was sort of like a 'coming into yourself' story as well as a romance, and I loved that. You did a really good job, although I do wish we could've seen a bit more inside the characters. Great job, though. :)