I loved the new chapters. You write amazingly. I really love the characters of Kasey and Candace - Kasey especially for some reason. Wodnerful, wonderful job : )
I really need to know what's wrong with Candace! And I'm totally glad that Kasey FINALLY told her he loves her. It took long enough. And Kasey's reaction to what Candace said at the "hot" springs was really funny. *rolls eyes at typical boy behavior and laughs*
Your stories are always amazing, but I think Sunshiner is my favorite. I can't wait until the next chapter. :]
I love this. I've read most of your other stories... I know, I'm such a creep/silent reader, but they're all really great and I wanted to finally say that I love them. They're really great.
I'm always too absorbed in this story to notice mistakes! (: this is my favorite story on Mibba and possibly my favorite story of all time. the characters are just so in-depth and beautiful.
(I read every chapter last night and this morning) I love it. (: keep writing more!
When they were in the diner and they were mad of each other, it reminded me of the Kids In Love video by Mayday Parade. I even started singing it a little. xD
Oh Wow, in my last comment, I mentioned something about coughing up blood...........maybe Candace has lung cancer, I don't remember if she smoked or not though.
Wonder how Kasey Ray will respond, I hope he doesnt just sit there for 5 whole minutes, speechless.
Gosh, I really hope Candace is okay with.....whatever....she has.
Loved, loved, loved the updates :) I'm still going with my theory that Candace is sick with something. :) Love this story so much :) That old man was precious. Just saying :)
I've fallen in love with this story. I felt like you should know.
I had you (and specifically this story) recced to me on the Story Finders thread and I think that I love the person for leading me here.
I am completely and utterly in love with your style of writing and the story that you're telling. You are by far one of the most beautiful and accomplished writers on this site - this story in of itself is perfect.
I hope that you update soon because I need to know how this ends. I think that it's literally killing me. I think waiting for these last chapters will be like when I was waiting for the Deathly Hallows to come out [/lamehpreference]
First of all, this is an absolutely amazing story. I'm pretty much in awe. Second, Ch. 15, paragraph 3, I think you meant to say crowds but it says crows. Just a heads up. (: