Sunshiner - Comments

Ooh you're blind Kasey Ray...

Maybe when he takes her home across the lake he can rely on the motion of the ocean to get her back in the mood! Haha

Awesome story! i absolutely love it! you are a brilliant writter! keep up the updates!

WAH!
I love your stories, dear. They're so wonderful and original and spectacular. It's interesting that you have the story from a boy's point of view, whereas stories like this are usually from the girl's. I like Kasey as a person... he's interesting and he makes you think about why boys act the way they do around girls they like or don't like, or even just their guy friends. You've obviously got a clear idea of how guys are.
And Candace? She's just a sneaky little chica who'll own everybody, now isn't she?? Again, originality points!! Tomboy turned Hotgirl, let's hear it for real life scenarios!
I am very interested in how this story will play out. The idea of Prank Wars is amazing, and your ideas never cease to amaze me! Hehe, maybe you should have a Prank Contest, see what pranks other people can come up with and maybe use them in your story? That would be cool, the whole giving credit to ppls out there. x3 Unless you've got the whole thing planned out already, and you're just teasing us with your brilliance.
There are only a couple of spelling errors, but they're so miniscule that I don't even register them in my mind.
You create your own backgrounds, no? I love how gentle it is, and how smooth the color is. It's nice not to have a story with something so overwhelming as rainbows and crazy people and whatnot. The design is very nice. ^_^ I look forward to your updates!

WOOOOOOOOOOOW
Kasey's a dumbass! hahaha
Loved the update!! more? :D

That boy really needs to read those extremely obvious signs.
Jeez....why must hormone-driven, partly drunk boys seemingly turn a blind eye?

I think Candace has a crush on Kasey!!

sunshiner is really interesting with the prank wars and candace.
i like this story. =) it has lots of potential.

towers:

DUDE, KASEY!!
urgh.

Took the words right out of my mouth. :grr:

Awesome update.

haha wow...kasey is sooo freaking oblivious/ignorant.
anyways...really good story.. UPDATE :)

Best quotes I've ever seen on Mibba and laughed at the most:

“This is…the woods. People piss here.”

“Lovely,” she commented dryly

“I bet that rock had more STDs than a prostitute,” I laughed.

“Aw, when I was little all the girls used to talk about this place,” she cooed. “I can’t believe I’m here.” Her smile disappeared and she looked mildly disappointed. “And I can’t believe it’s just a rock.”

I laughed so much! And I loved the update! This story is getting better by the chapters!

men!
as if that hint wasn't obvious enough!!

loved it
xx

so close!!! DX Kasey's so dumb DX

Kasey really is a very oblivious boy.

Gosh, and he was thinking she wasn't sober....pffft.

Thank you for updating though (:

DUDE, KASEY!!
urgh.

i have completely fallen in love with this story
Dayton sounds so refreshing and a great place to spend your summers
and your writing is amazing! super jealous

keep updating!!!!

Ohmigosh, darn this boy/guy/man and his dense-ness.

It's frustrating me.

awww. She liiiikes him

Candace knows how to handle her boys.
I absolutely love this story
Thanks for the update.

Ahh I love the new layout!
And of course, the updates. : )

oh shoot .and awesome update! : D