Those Things Beautiful. - Comments

Read them all in one go, pretty good. I can't wait to read more.

Your story was written really well. It's one of my favorites!

: D

Aww...
I loved it.
Update soon. For me, please. :D

I went back and reread all the chapters!
I really love this story!!
Can't wait to read more!!!

You know, to tell the truth, I almost forgot about this story. It was only when I saw the update and clicked the link did I remember. The update made me smile. I went back through the story and reread the chapters. My excitement for this story came back. :] Glad you decided to finish.

I really like this story.
It's really interesting.
Please update soon.

Aww! I feel bad for her!

i love this.
update again soon?

i'm subscribing too (:

I wanna cookie.

She finally met Zack!
Please please please update soon.
I really like this story

I'm really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see where you take it next.

Thank you.

Thank you so much for letting me know. God knows the layout would have looked like that forever if you hadn't said something.

Also, I just want to take a second and thank everyone for all these great comments! Whenever I see someone left me one, I get this big stupid smile on my face. And a lot of the time I think I forget to thank you, but I just wanted to tell you how much it means to me that you actually take the time to read this story.

yay! I love your story :)
btw your background isn't working.

I loved it!
More really, really soon? Pretty please? (:

I love the details and explanations in this story.
I love how those two met. :) Their bound to have an interesting relationship. Ahah.
Though the update was slow, it was super worth it. You're such an amazing writer.
+ I love how you make your layouts; the pictures too.

OKAY, SO. I'm only just now getting to comment this because I had to leave, but THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING! Ngh, this story is so perfect and adorable and it makes me happy. Seriously. You're a fantastic writer and I really can't get enough. Hailey is so reluctant to do just about anything and Zack is just like :D :D :D HI! and I'm just sitting here like ♥________♥

So...to end my rambling, this story is amazing, I'm glad you're keeping it, and you're an amazing writer.
<3

Are you kidding me!? Why stop now!!!!??? haha
UPDATE REAL SOOOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!
really good story:)

Hi, I'm Alex and I'm proud to say that you're officially another one of my favorite authors on this site.
*shakes hand*
I love how you compared things together in the chapter:
There were so many people. Like a beehive, where the bees were kids, all wearing different variations of each other. And they all sort of looked the same. And they were everywhere.

The school just seemed to be very clean and well-kept and tidy and spotless. And everyone there had these painted-on smiles slapped on their faces like someone had taken a paintbrush and smeared the bristles on their suntanned cheeks.

Probably two of my favorite lines in the chapter. Even though it was short, I still loved it. And FINALLY! Zack introduces himself, ahaha.

You finally updated. :) And I totally love you for that. xD
They're finally being introduced to each other. Well sort of, Zack did! Ahah.
I'm excited for the next chapter. :) I love the update.