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  • Ierogurl90

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    So cute... I heart updates <33333!
    October 18th, 2009 at 10:50pm
  • randy orton.

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    So, you can never find a good A7X story on this site most of the time, unless you want cliche storylines, but this story is just soo amazing. I really love it. Your writing style is super amazing, it's not like ALL dialogue. We get to know her opinions and such, and I love that in stories.

    This line I will forever remember: "Dana regretted putting her coloring books away. I regretted letting my parents drag me all the way to California. " I just REALLY REALLY LOVE that line. I love how you end your chapters, it has me wanting more and it's like a cliffy, but not really. If you get what I mean.

    So, uh, I'm totally subscribing to this. OH, and I love how ZV isn't automatically in the story. Like, Most stories would have him on the first chapter, and you never get time to learn the character beforehand, but you JUST FREAKING NAILED IT! It's safe to call you one of my favorite authors on this site, I'm so going to read your other stories.

    <33
    October 11th, 2009 at 07:09pm
  • Drastic Change;;

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    This story is unbearably cute.
    The details in it are great, and it's very well-written.
    All in all, I love this. ^^
    I hope to see more.
    September 13th, 2009 at 10:14pm
  • NikkiEst.6661

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    *subscribes!*
    Can't wait for an update! Love it =]
    September 7th, 2009 at 03:10pm
  • Gypsy Rose

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    I like how u used the words meat locker to discribe how cold the house was. :D

    I love your story keep update'n!
    September 4th, 2009 at 10:08pm
  • southerngirl76

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    I definitely cannot wait to read more! Great story so far!!
    September 1st, 2009 at 05:08pm
  • big bad wolf.

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    Please Update soon! I hate waiting! It's killing me!
    September 1st, 2009 at 01:37am
  • rhie

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    so glad i found this story!! :D its written so well... cant wait to read more of it!!!!
    August 31st, 2009 at 01:14pm
  • HopelesslyInLove

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    hey -im a new reader- waves i cant wait for more
    August 31st, 2009 at 11:14am
  • productionandstyle

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    Ierogurl90:
    You know the thing about the pancakes being a pre cursor to a bad day, that's how I felt about high school in general...
    Same here. Haha.
    August 31st, 2009 at 07:40am
  • Ierogurl90

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    You know the thing about the pancakes being a pre cursor to a bad day, that's how I felt about high school in general...
    August 31st, 2009 at 07:34am
  • freeflyer.

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    I LOVE this story!!!
    Its friggin awesomeness!
    Please update soon(:
    August 31st, 2009 at 07:19am
  • xXDaniKaulitzXx

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    I Just started reading this story, and lemme tell you it's super coolio! :]
    Can't wait for more updates!! xD
    August 30th, 2009 at 09:30pm
  • dream;lover

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    Great chapter, loved it (:
    can't wait to read about school,
    update soon!
    August 26th, 2009 at 02:14am
  • Kate Monster

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    Can't wait till more. I'm excited to read about when she starts school.
    August 24th, 2009 at 02:06am
  • CupcakeSaysDropDead

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    hope you update soooon =)
    August 24th, 2009 at 12:26am
  • big bad wolf.

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    OMFG! I loved this chapter! Can't wait till the next chapter!
    August 23rd, 2009 at 08:36pm
  • Zero-Mel

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    I love this story! Please continue with the constant updates! Can't wait to see how it turns out!:)
    August 23rd, 2009 at 06:26pm
  • AlDutlow

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    I'm really looking forward to your next update.
    I'm basically relating to everything in the story, except that when I go shopping with my mum, we kinda agree on everything. =P
    August 23rd, 2009 at 05:48pm
  • twistedjennifer2

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    Sweet!! I'm diggin the NEW update..
    August 23rd, 2009 at 03:12pm
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