-claps- I am excited for Zacky to come up on the next chapter. :] I like how you described Hailey's feelings so well. I could basically feel what she feels, everytime I read a chapter. The way she feels so different from everybody else, and wants to be like them, get's me sad. Especially considering the fact that she has no one to fall back on. Amazing update, as always.
You're off to a great start, and I like how you made her seem almost proud to be different than most people in the city she lived in. An individual. Hope to see more, soon.