Midnight Rain - Comments

If you have read a book that has sexual content, to keep it un-pornagraphic like, you use the word 'sex' rather then 'pussy' or 'vagina'. And actually Yes, I do have quite a bit of experience in writing it.

At first i was like ehhh...

But I gave it a chance and i loved it! You write fairly well which makes it more pleasurable to read, It seems you don't have much experience with sex scenes? Sorry if im wrong, you may just not want to ruin the story by saying anything other then "my sex" in reference to her snatch. It does sound kind of ugly I guess hmmm... I think at one point you said "i could feel him against my sex... something something.... it made my sex hot and moist.

Well you didnt need to say sex again, see how your writing can just lead to the implication thats what your talking about? because we know its her pleasure we are talking about :)

Geez... o.o XD

Intense, good update. Who the Fuck would hurt Johnny? Shoulds get their asses kicked!!!!!!!!!!

Sexyyy;D
Loved! Lol, she seems to be happier with him around. And awww:( poor Johnny.

X) Loved the update! XD

Glad she didn't hear the voice anymore, only thing; I feel like this story needs more dialouge from the guys & more Jimmy, love storyies with a lot of Jimmy X).

Update again soon.

I love this! Wonder why the icy voice in her head is just suddenly reappearing? hmmm. Update soon please:)

Thank you guy guys! The comments make me feel incredible and inspired. So I'm going to go back to writing. ALSO! I'm working on another story, its called, IMPULSE, the first chapter should be up today! Thank you for taking time to read and comment! <3

O.o I finally caught up... You need to update soon, can't just leave it there where the voice coomes back... Plus i wanna know what Zacky thinks of her new look...

this is sssssooooososososososossooooo good! yeah, i totally rubbernecked when i said that. please keep writing! you're a fantastic writer, and everyone misses reading your wonderful, intense words!

Thank you so much for taking your time to comment on this dinosour.
I really appreciate it:]
I'm working on another chapter just so you know:)

So I'm back, did I take long? No? Didn't think so... I love the first chapter. You did a great job with your character, we all KNOW she's a killer but can easily forgive her and except her as her Uncle. Her thought show us clearly that she truely didn't know what she was doing and is sick. The tone you used for her is also amazing. I feel like you used words that she would use, sounds kind of stupid because I don't know her but she talks like she really did get out of a hospital, ya know? Anyway I loved the first chp and I think i'll read more AFTER I finish my comment give away. Great job!

PAUSE! I have not read the first chapter YET but I WILL... i just wanted to comment on the summary first becuase it took me by surprise. I'm doing this from my phone so I didn't see the banner on top until later... I had no clue this was going to be a fanfic until I finished reading the summary. Can I just say, I love you? i was just reading the summary and thinking 'Wow this is going to be a really interesting story' then BAM read the Hunington Beach part and I was like 'Is this an a7x fanfic'? Then I read more to find out it is which just makes me so happy! You already drew me in and I didn't think your plot could get any better until you tossed in a7x... Ok Imma go read your first chp now XD.

love it
update more please

Thank you all for your supporting comments. I probably wouldn't have kept this story up if it wasn't for you guys. Thank you :)

do what you want to do.
brian still sounds a bit creepy and maybe jealous?

haha.
little thing. more soon?

i liked it!! update soon!

Thank you all for your comment's. They mean a lot to me. :]

Amazing! :] Love this Story

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