Love dearie :D I can't wait to see how the rest of this pans out. the dark imagery and emotions are wonderfully portrayed. hope to see more soon :) hint, hint. nudge, nudge. wink, wink.
I know who it is!!!!! Is it ironic that I'm eating candy now and bouncing off the walls? guess not. lol. the transition is going smoothly my dear. can't wait to see what happens next. :D
you watch too many crime shows. that was amazing detail and you can somewhat see the mental breakdown that Amanda had you know? updates :D I still don't know who she's going after....maybe Zack. He's smoother lmfao
Thank you all for your comments. I love them all. I was hoping one person would like the scene between Amanda and her Mother. Thank you all for taking the time to comment. I'll try to post Chapter Four today. :)
i really really mondo love this story so far. i randomly found this today and then decided to read your other stories and you're probably one of the best authors on here. yay!
YAY you updated!!!!! You have such amazing writing skills! You can just explain the characters and I can already picture them. I envy that. =D Can't wait for chapter three!!! =D
I really like this. This is an amazing beginning. You get a good look on the characters - you described them so well! =D This story has a lot of potential!!!!!!!!
they're dating now :D
I'm anticipating where this relationship will go