We're Trouble Bound - Comments

Okay, I read this thing in one sitting. That may be a record for me. Maybe I should call it a melting, since I've officially melted into my computer chair. That's beside the point. This. Was. Amazing. Why didn't I find it before? Oh, yeah, I'm oblivious.

I really loved how you wrote this. The random articles and Q & As were stellar. I've never read a story like that before. It was amazing and original. It worked so perfect though. And I loved how most of the insight was on Oliver. In so many stories, he's the mystery. In this one, it was Jaime. I loved that! It was nice to see the tables turned and see him deal with someone who "couldn't love." Mad props on that one.

Now, I think, I'm going to stalk your story list and find another one. (:

I just started reading this and I'm hooked. It's reeeeally good! :D
I'm a little late though, haha, I need to get a move on and read faster.

So uh wow. Two things: one, i loved this. I could go on and on and in about why but I'll spare you. Just... Know I loved it. A lot. I don't even like Oli that much and I loved this, so hopefully that shows you how much Iloved it. :)

two; I loved that Jaime was from Pittsburgh because I'm from Pittsburgh and NO ONE ever uses Pittsburgh in their stories. Even I hardly do it. So kudos girl! I'll definitely be checking out your stories from now on. Wish it hadn't taken me this long to do so. (:

Oh man I just read the WHOLE story tonight and I freaken LOVED it. Great job!

Someone asked me for an Oli story so I told them about this and Chasing Chaos.
It made me want to read this one again, so I just did.
I still love it to pieces.
<3

this story is amazing! ive been meaning to read it for like ages but have finally gotten around to actually doing it and it was just the best ever. it felt really real and made sense! totally love it, everything was really believable! :D your writing is amazing as well, i'd be well stoked if you decided to carry on oliver and jamie's story :3

I know this story is, like, super old, and complete. But I thought you should still know how amazing it was! I loved it, seriously. I think you did an AMAZING JOB writing it! Characters were so believable and the story in general made sense. I loved ittt. :]

I realise youve finished writing this already but i just wanted to comment and tell you how much i enjoyed reading it, i read the whole thing start to finish in like 24 hours and was really impressed, its an orginal plot line (and you dont see as many of those on here), and the story is very wel writeen (aside from the typos).

Well done :D

Oh, holy shit. I started reading this story while taking a break from studying for finals, and I ended up reading the whole thing. Like 8 hours later I realize that I just took the world's longest break. OOOOPS. It was worth it though. AMAZING story. I love your style of writing, and I loved how you included all the little faux articles and web searches into the chapters. Also, I liked the way the chapters were set up, mostly one month at a time. It made it so a lot of time passed over the course of the story, but it was such smooth transitions. Sorry for writing you a novel as a comment, I just really loved your story! OH, and I'm REALLY glad it didn't stop where you said it was going to. I might have cried. [:

Wow. I think i just fell in love with Oli Sykes all over again.
It's 4am, and i've just finished reading this and it was fantastic.
I don't really know what else to say. Absolutely unbelievable.

i love every part of this story x]

I was woried for a minute that it was not going to be a happy ending. You got me! I'm really happy the way this turned out. I don't even have that feeling of it shouldn't be over, it just felt right. Seriously, I'm not even sure what to say other than that.

aww i loved the ending.
it was...so Oli and Jamie.
this has been one of my addictions, and i am sad that it's gone,
but happy that they were happy together, so that made me happy.
and i am so following your new story...great so far.

best ending i could have possibly hoped for:)

I think my hearts going to burst out of my chest. I'm so fucking ecstatic!
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

ahww.
im so happy that she ended up saying i love you.
and that they get their happy ending.
in the chapter before the epolouge you seriously had me almost crying cause i thought they were gonna break upp.
lol.
ill have to read your new baby.
:]

I had this crazy smile on my face the entire time I was reading this update. I was going crazy, trying to figure out where this was going... and Oli absolutely cracked me up when he made his grand entrance. The flowers were so simple, and it was so sweet... I was laughing like crazy at Jaime's reaction. I adore this story, even though it's over... even through the Jamie/Oliver dramarama.

Thank you for the acknowledgement in your list of commenters. Love, <3

I cannot say thank you enough for writing one of the best Oli stories out there!
It truly was amazing, even through the Jamie-ness-ness-ness. And thank you for mentioning me in your long list of commenters haha.
I really loved the ending too. I loved everything. Lol. Thats a lot of love m'dear.

by the way, it appears i somehow made a face when all i wanted to put was swoon. huh. lol

the epilouge was a nice touch. something as simple as flowers on such an important day to them and he remembered... : haha i really hope you continue the story, if not soon, then eventually.