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  • Desolate Earth

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    Yay!!! i'm so glad they got together!
    July 24th, 2009 at 05:35am
  • andthereason

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    you are honestly one of the best writers I've ever read their work of. That sentence doesn't really make sense but whatever, aahha. This story was amazing in every single way, and I'm glad you ended it the way you did, I wouldn't have really lenjoyed a sappy or depressing ending nearly as much.
    Gotta admit, im excited for chaing chaos now, ahaha.
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    July 24th, 2009 at 03:24am
  • drop dead vanity

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    absolutely amazing:]
    i'm so happy with the way you ended this:]]
    i'm super excited about your new story too!!
    can't wait!
    July 24th, 2009 at 02:17am
  • DahliaJade

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    Haha, oh dude! I soooo know it :) two peas in a pod thee and me.

    The fact that Jaime and Oli ended up together, the fact she said 'I love you' eventually; and even if there was a douchebag involved, made my mother'effin day bro.
    I have swine flu man, I'm in 'isolation' for five days. You've no idea how much this has cheered me up.
    Now 'chasing chaos' hop to it haha, and make my day tommorow too?
    X
    July 24th, 2009 at 02:07am
  • sylvia wrath

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    I literally dropped everything I was doing so I could read this.
    I think I kind of thought that you'd give it a happy ending, after that one conversation we had, and I'm quite happy you did. I think they maybe deserve a happy ending, since they're not used to one.
    I loved this story like no other, you have no idea. I remember searching "Oli Sykes", this coming up, and me basically falling in love at two in the morning. I stayed up to read it, even when I had exams the next morning and really shouldn't have.
    Anyway. I love this.
    I secretly hope that this isn't the end to their story, but even if it is, it's a sufficient one.
    Now I'm excited to read your next story, and comment the shit outta that one too.
    July 24th, 2009 at 01:57am
  • she floats

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    :D

    It's so fucking stupid how happy I am that they've ended up together. Hah.

    And thanks for the mention. It's nice to be appreciated. [[:
    July 24th, 2009 at 01:42am
  • DahliaJade

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    You break my heart way too much girl!
    Their break up/make up/break up? was gut wrenchingly beautiful. It's how love really is underneath all the smoke and mirrors and bells and whistles.
    I'm itching for the epilogue. Emily hearts Jaime like no other.
    X
    July 18th, 2009 at 09:16pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    Haha, I'm reading all these comments and wondering the same things. I thought it was a really well-rounded chapter. We've all been wondering what Jaime's been thinking, and we finally get to see what's been going on in that head of her's. And Tom tied it all together so nicely and kind of put this element of hope for the two of them out there. Oli made me smile like there was no tomorrow. Sure, he was confused, but it was adorable and who'd have figured it'd take someone to meet their own match to change them?

    But yeah... Jaime should 'fess up to her feelings and just say it. Haha.
    July 18th, 2009 at 08:58pm
  • drop dead vanity

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    ahhh!
    you're a fucking bitch for putting me through that!
    damn right there better be an epilogue, else i'd have to fucking kill a cunt:/
    post that shot soon!
    July 17th, 2009 at 07:31am
  • cantcontainit

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    mehhh, if she can't tell oliver that she loves him...Imma slap a ho.
    July 16th, 2009 at 11:15pm
  • erratic

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    EPILOGUE?!

    You're killing me.
    But I don't care.
    As long as you post it, I'll be happy.
    July 16th, 2009 at 04:54pm
  • plastic heart;

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    man i feel like crying, Jamie is killing Oli, and me....she should just say it.
    oh god say you love him please, for me...teehee.
    July 16th, 2009 at 02:15pm
  • cherryc0la

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    what the hell was that?!?!?!
    July 16th, 2009 at 08:28am
  • FTS.brittni.

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    Just so you know, I totally hate you for just leaving me like that. Really? I'm sitting here, sobbing my head off, waiting for her to FINALLY tell him she loves him. And then you just end it? Gah.

    PLEASE hurry with the epilogue.
    July 16th, 2009 at 03:47am
  • UnderScore_

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    wow
    i am actually really sad this is ending
    it was the most epic oli story i've read
    and definately will be a favourite for a long time to come.
    Love the update and this story
    xoxo
    July 16th, 2009 at 03:43am
  • Lowered_Expectations

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    Grreat update. Man Jaime sure knows how to twist the knife in Oli's heart and without even knowing it. I still love this story.
    July 13th, 2009 at 10:22am
  • Jay Lynn

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    "Okay, cool."
    I am so pissed that she would blow off an entirely sincere I love you from a man that has given up so much for her. All things he gave up are actually good things to give up, but he changed himself for her, and all she has to say about it is 'cool'?
    If I were Oli, I would get as far away from her as possible with no contact. He just needs to take care of it like a bandaid. Ripped off, clean and quick.
    I do love Jamie, but she's just pissing me off, and Oliver deserves way better then she can give.

    I loved the update, by the way. I know it's coming to an end, and I'm really sad about that.
    But either Oliver leaves because he finally gets that he deserves better, or she gets over herself and shows how amazing she could be, because I know she can.
    Definitely a very blunt comment, but if it helps, I still love the story!!!
    : D
    July 12th, 2009 at 01:56pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    So, I know Jaime's the messed up character. But to say "okay, cool" when your boyfriend confesses his love for you is... heartbreaking. I felt crushed after reading the phone call scene. He was honest with her, he didn't hide his feelings at all... but Jaime's been holding back. If she doesn't fight for him, what hope is there for them? It makes me tear up even thinking that, but it's just... she needs to tell him how she feels and how much she misses him. She needs to admit she loves him in person or on the phone. So sad for the final chapter, but I'm definitely on board for the new story. <3
    July 11th, 2009 at 10:52pm
  • DahliaJade

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    You're breaking my heart over and over dude. That phone call killed me.
    The fact that Olivers head over heelsand Jaimes entirely indifferent; or so it seems.
    I'm sad for the final chapter but you know how pumped I am for your new venture.
    Did you get my email?
    X
    July 11th, 2009 at 09:01pm
  • plastic heart;

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    aww i can't wait for the next one.
    i wonder if she'll say she loves him too.
    it's so cute.
    anyway....i don't want it to end....cry...teehee.
    July 11th, 2009 at 05:55pm