you are honestly one of the best writers I've ever read their work of. That sentence doesn't really make sense but whatever, aahha. This story was amazing in every single way, and I'm glad you ended it the way you did, I wouldn't have really lenjoyed a sappy or depressing ending nearly as much. Gotta admit, im excited for chaing chaos now, ahaha. x
Haha, oh dude! I soooo know it :) two peas in a pod thee and me.
The fact that Jaime and Oli ended up together, the fact she said 'I love you' eventually; and even if there was a douchebag involved, made my mother'effin day bro. I have swine flu man, I'm in 'isolation' for five days. You've no idea how much this has cheered me up. Now 'chasing chaos' hop to it haha, and make my day tommorow too? X
I literally dropped everything I was doing so I could read this. I think I kind of thought that you'd give it a happy ending, after that one conversation we had, and I'm quite happy you did. I think they maybe deserve a happy ending, since they're not used to one. I loved this story like no other, you have no idea. I remember searching "Oli Sykes", this coming up, and me basically falling in love at two in the morning. I stayed up to read it, even when I had exams the next morning and really shouldn't have. Anyway. I love this. I secretly hope that this isn't the end to their story, but even if it is, it's a sufficient one. Now I'm excited to read your next story, and comment the shit outta that one too.
You break my heart way too much girl! Their break up/make up/break up? was gut wrenchingly beautiful. It's how love really is underneath all the smoke and mirrors and bells and whistles. I'm itching for the epilogue. Emily hearts Jaime like no other. X
Haha, I'm reading all these comments and wondering the same things. I thought it was a really well-rounded chapter. We've all been wondering what Jaime's been thinking, and we finally get to see what's been going on in that head of her's. And Tom tied it all together so nicely and kind of put this element of hope for the two of them out there. Oli made me smile like there was no tomorrow. Sure, he was confused, but it was adorable and who'd have figured it'd take someone to meet their own match to change them?
But yeah... Jaime should 'fess up to her feelings and just say it. Haha.
ahhh! you're a fucking bitch for putting me through that! damn right there better be an epilogue, else i'd have to fucking kill a cunt:/ post that shot soon!
Just so you know, I totally hate you for just leaving me like that. Really? I'm sitting here, sobbing my head off, waiting for her to FINALLY tell him she loves him. And then you just end it? Gah.
wow i am actually really sad this is ending it was the most epic oli story i've read and definately will be a favourite for a long time to come. Love the update and this story xoxo
"Okay, cool." I am so pissed that she would blow off an entirely sincere I love you from a man that has given up so much for her. All things he gave up are actually good things to give up, but he changed himself for her, and all she has to say about it is 'cool'? If I were Oli, I would get as far away from her as possible with no contact. He just needs to take care of it like a bandaid. Ripped off, clean and quick. I do love Jamie, but she's just pissing me off, and Oliver deserves way better then she can give.
I loved the update, by the way. I know it's coming to an end, and I'm really sad about that. But either Oliver leaves because he finally gets that he deserves better, or she gets over herself and shows how amazing she could be, because I know she can. Definitely a very blunt comment, but if it helps, I still love the story!!! : D
So, I know Jaime's the messed up character. But to say "okay, cool" when your boyfriend confesses his love for you is... heartbreaking. I felt crushed after reading the phone call scene. He was honest with her, he didn't hide his feelings at all... but Jaime's been holding back. If she doesn't fight for him, what hope is there for them? It makes me tear up even thinking that, but it's just... she needs to tell him how she feels and how much she misses him. She needs to admit she loves him in person or on the phone. So sad for the final chapter, but I'm definitely on board for the new story. <3
You're breaking my heart over and over dude. That phone call killed me. The fact that Olivers head over heelsand Jaimes entirely indifferent; or so it seems. I'm sad for the final chapter but you know how pumped I am for your new venture. Did you get my email? X