We're Trouble Bound - Comments

i am STOKED for your next story. I'd read it even if it was half as amazing as this one

eeeeek. jaime really needs to say it. like, pronto.

ahh.!
don tell me that you get teary cause theyre gonna break upp!

Okay, cool?!

C'mon, Jaime.

That's messed up. Poor Oliver.

So... I kind of want to go crawl in a hole and cry after this chapter, but only because you are so good at portraying everything... it's a good thing.

I just, I feel so bad for Oli. She NEEDS to tell him she loves him. She NEEDS to hug him and make everything better. She NEEDS to make sure he knows she loves him, because she does. Because I'm just going to be absolutely crushed if she doesn't.

Poor Oli...

wow, Jaime. poor oli.
I like how he's twiggin' out about it and it's not even a big deal.
It could have been 389249842 times worse. and it's still asking a lot because it's him.

and she responds to the fact the he loves her with okay, cool? seriously? is she that dull? she's worse than a boy.

if you're going to make me really sad in this next chapter I don't even want you to post it. DON'T MAKE ME SAD. THAT'S MEAN. please be nice?

oh god, that was sad:/
i dont really know what to say again:[
i know that i'm really sad because i'm pretty sure the ending is gonna be sad:[ i just hope they stay together! even though i'm pretty doubtful.
please update soon?

"Okay, cool" was all she could say?
Oh my.
I feel really bad for Oli.

Thanks for the heads up on the next chapter.
I'll have a box of tissues ready.

ahh.
its ending.
:/
this is one of the storys that i look forward to reading when i type in mibba.com.

One of the things I love about this story is it's believability. That's not even a word, but I love how you encorporate things from everyday life and are depicted so incredibly precisely that it makes it all the more realistic (like the message boards and things)

aww i love this story, and sad it's nearly over, but it was a good run.
haha.
and i am willing to help yeh if yeh want. teehee.

haha leeee. another deep moment, instantly broken. :)
still addicting, keep it up.

Great update!!
And I'm pretty good with story names.
So I'd be willing to help. :)

Holy fudge...cake

that was a good chapter..

cute..but not to the point where I start to choke on my own vomit

(wow I am descriptive today lol)
:)

That was fucking amazing!! I honestly thouught that would have been the end, but I'm pleased that it isnt:]
I have no idea what you are gonna do with the last two chapters, but knowing you, it'll probably be amazing:]
hurry up and get a new chapter out!
hah please?

I absolutely LOVE how real this story is. It wasn't just 'oh i like you' "oh i like you too' 'lets go get married!'. I'm tired of that same old shit. it just doesn't happen. it's really, really nice to read a story that would most likely happen in real life more often than not. so keep up the magnificent work. it's ah-may-za-zing!!!(:
Love,
Ellie:D

erratic:

Way to ruin a cute moment, Lee.

On another note, I like the way you incorporate myspace, interviews, and whatnot into the story. It's interesting to read about what people on the outside think of the situation, then how Jaime responds to them.

As usual, I can't wait to read more.

Couldn't have said it better myself. This story is epic, it really is... and even though it may not end on a happy note, it'll still remain one of my favourites for sure. I can't wait for more, =)

amazing as usual :)

Way to ruin a cute moment, Lee.

On another note, I like the way you incorporate myspace, interviews, and whatnot into the story. It's interesting to read about what people on the outside think of the situation, then how Jaime responds to them.

As usual, I can't wait to read more.

so, ive just started reading.
and ive sorta fallin in love with the story.
i cant stress how original it is :)
like i really fuckin' love it
its well written, funny and doesnt drag things out.
more soon, eh!