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  • jennabean44

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    I feel this deep connection with the characters with this story, like I'm part of their life. I love this story so much.
    July 29th, 2009 at 12:53am
  • Jack Skellington

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    I just want to give Jeremy a huge hug. Like, enormous. I just feel soo bad for him. Too bad I can't jump into my computer... Cry

    Amazing update.

    :cute:
    July 26th, 2009 at 02:28am
  • daydreamer2006

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    PS I'm super jealous that you got to see JM before me xP
    Two more days!
    July 19th, 2009 at 09:32pm
  • daydreamer2006

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    Oh. My God.

    Wow.

    That was super intense. But I really, really liked it.
    I really did.

    Jeremy just.... exploded. And he somewhat took it out on Cassie. I believe that he didn't mean to hurt her, but I can't help thinking this is going to change their relationship.
    At least a little.

    Just..... wow.
    That was amazing, especially for a chapter that ran away from you xD
    July 19th, 2009 at 09:32pm
  • jennabean44

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    I fully and completely in love with this story. It is absolutely amazing. You are SO talented.
    July 17th, 2009 at 12:06am
  • bonvivante

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    i loved it. poor jeremy i just want to give him a hug.
    and then cassie just needs to talk to jeremy when
    he goes into confession mode, cause otherwise he
    might get the wrong impression and think she agrees
    with the reasons he gets hit.
    July 7th, 2009 at 06:07pm
  • m3gAn

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    GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!
    i really liked this chapter
    wow....
    jeremy.
    WOW!
    that WAS intense
    UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 6th, 2009 at 12:05am
  • m3gAn

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    i REALLY love your story!!!!!
    itts fantastic!
    but i feel kinda bad for cassidy :(
    UPDATE SOON!!!
    July 2nd, 2009 at 09:58pm
  • daydreamer2006

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    So, I just realized you updated.
    Cause I had to wade through all the emails.

    Anyways, about the actual story.
    I haven't looked through the songs on the player (I just saw Circles xD) but I'm thinking it's bad that she's keeping everything inside. That tends to not be a good thing.
    And I'm really curious for Jeremy's next breakdown. I want to know what sets him off, and what happens.
    Also, if I read the foreshadowing right, something bad's going to happen between the two of them. I'm kind of hoping I read that wrong, but maybe not :(
    July 2nd, 2009 at 01:42am
  • fearlessgirl

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    Awesome, as usual. Hope you get over your writer's block soon!
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:24pm
  • bonvivante

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    lovee itt. you should update *winkwink*
    June 17th, 2009 at 06:18am
  • Jack Skellington

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    Lovely new layout and title. ;)

    I think that Jeremy is going to leave her behind. Err- maybe not leave her behind but like.... um... I had the PERFECT word in my head and now it's gone. :O

    But amazing. Even though it took me forever to read. :D

    :cute:
    June 14th, 2009 at 09:31am
  • daydreamer2006

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    Haha I know all about changing the plot.
    Don't you hate it?
    Well, I have a love-hate relationship with it.
    Like a lot of things, I guess.

    Anyways, I really liked this chapter, partly because we could see more about her, and somewhat what she was passionate about.
    Uggh I'm butchering this comment.
    Just know I liked it (:
    June 12th, 2009 at 09:39pm
  • fearlessgirl

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    Thanks for the story comment! I'm glad you liked it :D
    June 3rd, 2009 at 02:45am
  • samiiRAWR

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    Newest reader! =]
    I luvv this story!
    Aw. Jeremy is too cute ^^
    Heehee.
    I can't wait for the next update!!!
    June 2nd, 2009 at 06:10am
  • fearlessgirl

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    I love the introduction--it's a greathook, and leaves you wondering what's going to happen. You definitely have talent. :D :cute:
    May 30th, 2009 at 02:59pm
  • daydreamer2006

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    I liked this. I love getting into character's heads (:

    I love Jeremy, too. He's so strong, even after everything he's been through.
    May 30th, 2009 at 03:55am
  • Jack Skellington

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    This chapter, for some reason, made me cry. I don't know why. (Haha, I'm a poet) This chapter is insane! I love it! You described Jeremy so well. Like... wow.

    :D
    May 30th, 2009 at 02:46am
  • Jack Skellington

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    I THOUGHT I SUBSCRIBED! I was looking for something to read, so I was going through my subscriptions and stuff, and in the first chapter thingy, you said it'd take a little bit longer for updates, so I thought you didn't update yet, but I'm stupid and I forgot to sub. :twitch:

    I love this, though! :tehe: Cassie is so easy to relate to and I love Jeremy.

    My best friend's name is Jeremy, and he's exactly like Jeremy in your story! Very arrogant and cynical, he just doesn't get beaten. :yah

    I SUBSCRIBED! (this is a really long comment XD) :crazy:
    May 22nd, 2009 at 06:57am
  • daydreamer2006

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    They're friends again!
    Yay!
    Loved it (:
    May 14th, 2009 at 03:59am