That was super intense. But I really, really liked it. I really did.
Jeremy just.... exploded. And he somewhat took it out on Cassie. I believe that he didn't mean to hurt her, but I can't help thinking this is going to change their relationship. At least a little.
Just..... wow. That was amazing, especially for a chapter that ran away from you xD
i loved it. poor jeremy i just want to give him a hug. and then cassie just needs to talk to jeremy when he goes into confession mode, cause otherwise he might get the wrong impression and think she agrees with the reasons he gets hit.
So, I just realized you updated. Cause I had to wade through all the emails.
Anyways, about the actual story. I haven't looked through the songs on the player (I just saw Circles xD) but I'm thinking it's bad that she's keeping everything inside. That tends to not be a good thing. And I'm really curious for Jeremy's next breakdown. I want to know what sets him off, and what happens. Also, if I read the foreshadowing right, something bad's going to happen between the two of them. I'm kind of hoping I read that wrong, but maybe not :(
I think that Jeremy is going to leave her behind. Err- maybe not leave her behind but like.... um... I had the PERFECT word in my head and now it's gone. :O
But amazing. Even though it took me forever to read. :D
Haha I know all about changing the plot. Don't you hate it? Well, I have a love-hate relationship with it. Like a lot of things, I guess.
Anyways, I really liked this chapter, partly because we could see more about her, and somewhat what she was passionate about. Uggh I'm butchering this comment. Just know I liked it (:
This chapter, for some reason, made me cry. I don't know why. (Haha, I'm a poet) This chapter is insane! I love it! You described Jeremy so well. Like... wow.
I THOUGHT I SUBSCRIBED! I was looking for something to read, so I was going through my subscriptions and stuff, and in the first chapter thingy, you said it'd take a little bit longer for updates, so I thought you didn't update yet, but I'm stupid and I forgot to sub. :twitch:
I love this, though! :tehe: Cassie is so easy to relate to and I love Jeremy.
My best friend's name is Jeremy, and he's exactly like Jeremy in your story! Very arrogant and cynical, he just doesn't get beaten. :yah
I SUBSCRIBED! (this is a really long comment XD) :crazy: