Spun Down - Comments

Oh wow I love the story!

They would be a really cute couple. :wink:

Actually, it just seemed like his dad would hit him, the way he was hiding things. Abuse does that to you :'(

No! I KNEW Jeremy's dad would hit him! :twitch: Bastard (the dad, not Jeremy). Please update soon!

I knew it!
Although technically I didn't call it.....

I still knew it.

Aww poor Jeremy! And Cassie, too ):

But the player worked for me! Which is good (:

Oh my god! I was right, wasn't I?! That asshole of a father is hitting, Jeremy, isn't he?! Oh, grr... I should've known! I just wanna jump into the screen and wring that dickwad's neck lick there's no tomorrow. :grr: Nobody deserves that, least of all, Jeremy.

Poor Cassie, must be so confused, Ritchie even, but Cassie more so, since she's so close to Jeremy. Poor things, all of them then. I kinda felt sorry for Ritchie when Cassie mentioned being the bridge that kept Ritchie and Jeremy attached. I almost wanted to smack her silly for saying she'd there'd be no choice and she'd stick with Jeremy. :XD Even though I lean towards Jeremy, not even I would be that mean!

Wow...what's going on with Jeremy? Excellent, as always :D

Haha!! I LOVE this new chapter...I've played a joke like that on my best friend/sister but since I'm a "goody two-shoes" she called me on it right away. :(

The player didn't work for me either :(
Same deal - it loaded, but no sound came out.

But I loved the chapter. I really love Jeremy and Cassidy's relationship.
But I'm also a sucker for best friends.... so.....

Heyy, so normally I hate posting on my own forums.
But I have a reason.
Could someone please tell me if the player I put on the story works? It doesn't work for me, it says it's loaded 100%, but then it still doesn't play anything. I know my speakers are turned up and crap, but I don't really matter. I want to know you if guys can hear it, so just drop a line right here and tell me. That'd be sweet,
Muchas gracias(:

Ritchie has finally arrived! He seems kinda like those bad ass type of guys, am I right? Well, I think I was right, he's made his first entrance and I'm already in love with him!

I feel kinda bad though, cause Cassie was narrating about how even though he was accepted into the group, he would never be close to either of them, or even touch the surface of what Jeremy and Cassie share. :grr: It was like, "Wow, a bit harsh there, don't cha think?" :XD But, then again, I'm sure you have your reasons, and I'm sure that you'll prove us all wrong!

Haha, the bit where Jeremy goes gay on that douche jock was hilarious! Sadly, I could actually picture that happening! Well, I look forward to more Ritchie, more Cassie, more Jeremy, and more Ritchie. :tehe: Haha, me kids, I still love Jeremy more than Ritchie.

This is so great!!!! Keep writing!!!!

you are a really really great writer. this story is really good.
normally i prefer more dialouge in stores but i absolutely adore reading this.

Oh no. The only thing that's really going through my mind is, "Holy hell, is Jeremy being abused, physically or sexually?" He seems to really be hiding something, and I get the feeling that Cassie's mommy knows a little something-something! :omfg: Dear Lord, if he's getting abused, I'm gonna jump in there and open up a can of whoop ass on his dad. :XD

Also, the fact that he made up an excuse that his dad 'doesn't like guests' seems really bogus and sketchy to me. I hope everything turns out okay for Jeremy. I'm freaking out for him! Great update! Can't wait for more. :cute:

Oooh I like this chapter (:

I can't wait to hear more about Jeremy.
He seems like my favorite type of guy....
If that makes sense.

This is excellent as always...Cassidy is really easy to relate to <3

You really are a great writer hun. :cute:

Even though I might be late in this comment, I'm damn excited to see what happens next in this story. I'm curious to find out who Ritchie is, and how he plays a part in this story. Um, I think I love Jeremy already :tehe:, but who knows? I'll probably love Ritchie too!

Anyways, I can't wait for another chapter!

Your a great writer,

and i love this story.
i can't pin point it, but it's great.