This Heart, It Beats, Beats for Only You - Comments

  • burningchances;

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    Awww what a tease this chapter is!
    I want a real chapter to find out what happens with Casey and Joe!
    Also what the hell are M and S doing together! I smell something fishy! Maybe a new plan?
    But I can't wait for more!
    February 17th, 2010 at 07:54am
  • in his kiss;

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    lovely update, as usual :)
    February 17th, 2010 at 03:37am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    I swore I had subscribed and commented to this story. OOOPSIES
    Anyways, it's amazingly cute aznd fun to read, except the whole Joe situation with his heart :(
    February 17th, 2010 at 01:42am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Joe woke up when his chest started hurting. He clutched his heart, gasping in my pain.

    Just a general comment, I think you meant 'gasping in pain.' I love how this chapter really toys with the reader's emotions. You really get lost in the story and that is what makes it beautiful.
    February 12th, 2010 at 05:01am
  • picklesmcgee

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    Joe just needs to tell Casey what's going on, before she tries to kill him. Please update soon.
    February 11th, 2010 at 05:15am
  • Juno

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    well geez
    make her wake up alone.
    great, now she's all flustered.
    lol.
    great chapter love!
    February 9th, 2010 at 05:02pm
  • peaceperson

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    I loved this :)
    I had to catch up, since i haven't read in awhile.
    BUT IT IS SO SAD AND AMAZING AT THE SAME TIME.
    February 9th, 2010 at 04:34am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    He really needs to tell her
    February 8th, 2010 at 09:48am
  • alice liddell.

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    “I don’t need someone,” Joe said quietly. “I need her.”

    I think that's the sweetest line!
    Gosh, can Joe get any sweeter than that? XD
    February 8th, 2010 at 09:42am
  • in his kiss;

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    nick & zoey forever !!! <3 :D
    anyway that was a good chapter I just dont want joe to leave her !! AGAIN !!
    February 8th, 2010 at 01:01am
  • burningchances;

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    I'm going to kill Joe! He keeps leaving Casey!
    Why won't you stay with her Joe? She would accept that you where dying!
    It's just going to kill her more when you die!
    Ughhhh Damnit Joe!
    February 7th, 2010 at 11:18pm
  • spoonerisms

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    So cute but she still needs to know.
    Seriously.
    It would be tragic if he just suddenly died. ):
    And she HAD NO IDEA!
    adsflskdlfa.

    But that text message part was so cute. Awwww.
    January 20th, 2010 at 11:37am
  • Juno

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    it's about timeeee!
    ughhh i was growing antsy waiting for joe to just, sweep in and take her away.
    =]
    January 19th, 2010 at 04:49pm
  • keepthislovealive

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
    DEVI, DON'T YOU DARE DO ANYTHING. I'M SO HAPPY NOW :]
    YOU BETTER NOT SCREW THEIR RELATIONSHIP UP OR ANYTHING EVIL LIKE THAT.
    awwwwww it was just so cute with the kiss and he's exactly where he needs to be (:
    eeep. :]]
    January 17th, 2010 at 03:33am
  • burningchances;

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    Omg I love this more and more.
    It was so cute that he stayed with her and gave into his emotions.
    & Yay a happy ending out of what 11 chapters hahaha.
    January 17th, 2010 at 03:12am
  • KiwiJonasTwilightFan

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    [text=6]With the little time he had left, he didn’t want to miss another moment with her. He had realized today, when he saw her running from the room, tears in her eyes, that he couldn’t stay away any longer. He knew it was cruel, putting her through this when he was – dying, but he couldn’t stop himself. He needed her. He wanted her.

    Aaaah, I'm so happy that Joe finally didn't pull away. :)
    But when is he going to tell her the full truth??
    Can't wait!

    p.s
    "I’m exactly where I need to be."
    That line is really sweet. :)
    ♥ ♥
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    January 17th, 2010 at 02:34am
  • alice liddell.

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    ^^
    I must second the above.
    I loved how you ended the chapter with that last line. So cute
    January 17th, 2010 at 12:06am
  • cynicalqueen

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    With the little time he had left, he didn’t want to miss another moment with her. He had realized today, when he saw her running from the room, tears in her eyes, that he couldn’t stay away any longer. He knew it was cruel, putting her through this when he was – dying, but he couldn’t stop himself. He needed her. He wanted her.

    And that, was just absolutely brilliant. As much as I wish he'd be honest with her, it was cute.
    January 16th, 2010 at 11:02pm
  • eclipsed.by.glory;;

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    yay this was super adorable. i do agree that the whole alex thing was wrong, and i'm glad she figured it out before anything too drastic happened. and YAY for joe and casey finally getting together. i'm so glad that joe is finally able to understand his feelings for casey.

    this was so cute. can't wait for the next one devi. i'm sure it'll be amazing.
    January 16th, 2010 at 10:24pm
  • halfofmyheart;

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    Oh snaaap! Nice! Can't wait for the next update!
    January 16th, 2010 at 01:34am