I Won't Call This Hell - Comments

hsjwlddfs last chapter was so good :3
I almost "aww"ed out loud.
They can just get back together now. They're so cute.
Can't wait for your next update gurllll ;P

It's like every time I see an update for this story, I'm freaking out that it's over. You're such a tease, dude.
But anyway... no, not mushy, but... what's the word? Appropriate. Condescending on John's part. He should feel like crap. They both should feel like crap. I just want them to forgive each other and get back together.
But then again, I don't want the story to end.
Moral dilemma, you see?

Where can I get one? John is so fucking adorable and oh my god if Lynn doesn't forgive him. I don't even know what the fuck would happen, an apocalypse most likely. Too mushy? Impossible. It was perfect and beautiful and ultimately emotional. Makes me feel like they should make more John O'Callaghans.

I hope you know, I'm angry at you right now.
WHY WOULD YOU SHORTEN IT?! D:
ahah. gah. I got that throaty feeling when you're about to cry. lmfaoo. I'M pitiful.
gosh. I loved it. :D
Update it soon?

So. I almost started crying reading the end of the chapter. Just saying.

everything about this story is good. i have yet to find any flaws. please update soon. :3

I. Am. Addicted!!!!

Wow John's confession blew me away i cant wait for the next chapter!

xoxo Aj

That wasn't mushy at all, it was beautiful. You convey emotion perfectly, and I can't get over it, honestly.
I actually can't get over your dialogue. It's perfect, but not too perfect. It's believable, and with things like this, it's beyond difficult to make believable dialogue because you want the words to be perfect, but you, of course, pull it off beautifully.
I've recently fallen in love with this story, and I'm going to be so disappointed when it ends, but that's a good thing, trust me. (:

Oh my GOD!
I think that was just the right amount of mushiness!
I was really getting into it, & I felt like a little pang in my heart at the end.
& I really also do not want this to end!

AHHHHH I loved it!
It's getting so intense.
I can't wait for you to update it againnn.

ohshit. of course you end it there right? //:
I loved it. Made me tear a little.
Gah. Post soon.! ;D Or..I'll...eat you. <- that was lame. lmfao. ha.

I'm sorry for being a silent reader throughout most of this, but I've always been left speechless and I hate leaving the same stereotypical comments over and over again because I know that sometimes those get old and nothing changed when you read them but, I just, this chapter was basically exactly what I needed. I felt everything everyone was feeling, and even now my chest hurts a little because I can relate so well to it. I swear, you could be an author if you wanted to be, because when I read this, I was reminded of authors and books that I love.
I sound so pitiful, because I was. I am. Damn it, John, you broke my fucking heart. And I didn't even see it coming. I had been planning... and I didn't even see it coming.
That's just the perfect ending, and I don't know where the next chapter will begin, but I feel like this basically sums up the entire story. The conversation between her and John in this chapter sums up every emotion in this story, and it's just perfect. I honestly can't even come up with words.
To be stereotypical, it was beautiful, and is beautiful.

Whoahhh I'm late on this.
But I LOVEDDDD the last two chapters. They're keeping me on the edge!
I hopeee John and her make everything okay again<3 Cause that'd be great.
I'm gonna miss this story when it's done :']
Love it, can't wait until the next one, whenever I read it! ;p

this is not a bitch. this is a very lovely story that i never want to end. though i know it will D:

what the fuck dude?!
ahaha. You couldn't have just posted up everything you typed?
Gah, it's endinggg. ! ahah. I like that : "every story has to end" or something along those lines you said. aha.
Well...not much to sayy.
post the damn chapter soon though.
(: Love it. ha.

I just read all 32 chapters. I love this story and I'm sad it's ending, but I can't wait to find out how it ends. You're a great writer! (:

Good chapter, i liked the authors note, i'm sad its ending but in a happy way and that's an oxy moron i know but its what i feel haha ^^

i really don't want this story to end!
it was amazing, and i enjoyed reading it.
i hope it has a happy ending though, especially since you're not going to make a sequel, hahaha.
update again soon pleaaaaaase (:

I COMMENTED ON THIS BITCH. Just wanted to say I am sad that it is almost over... =( but I love this story sooo much! she is the exact replica of me, so it was nice to have a story sorta from my point of view.