Thank you very much. Sorry about the grammer problems. I keep meaning to profread them.. but I just don't have the time or energy and if profread I end up changing so many things it just isn't what it would be orginally. but thank you! XD
It's creative with a new twist to the usual arranged marrieage plot. I like it, the innocence you transmit through the main characters is fresh and new. Work on your grammar a bit and keep writing. You can be a great writer. I'll be checking for the next chapter. Good job!
I love it! It's so creative! But I kinda laughed when I found out they HAD to have sex or they would die. Hahaha, if only people had that excuse in real life! I'm intrigued to see what happens next :)