It Was Never Supposed to Be Easy - Comments

I loved the update.
I can't wait for more.
This story is addicting to read.

Yea, she is a creepy character. I creeped myself out just writing her...

but that's not hard to do, I'm a jumpy one.

tee hee hee! i smiled when it came to the part when she looked up and draco was there :P it takes a fair bit to make me smile nowadays :P oooh his mother is freak-ay!!

i still think she should go back to ron, lol.

cause she's losing all her friends, but if that's what she wants to do.
Great update, can't wait for the next one, you can update as quickly as you want!!!
sooner the better.

wowness I'm starting to like Draco too, what with this and the Cassandra Claire trilogy...
please continue to update as often as you need to. xD

omfg dont apologize!! this is every reader's dream: long updates close together!!! And what good updates they are! :P

love it! write more!

Wow,
I loved the update.
I can't wait to read more of this story.
It is really good.

I so so SO love it so far! More soon when you can please!

<3rebeccalynn

AHHHH! NEW CHAPTER!
IN LESS THAN 24 HOURS!
*tackles in hug*

REVIEW TIME! [[I like giving reviews... it's kind of grown into a bit of a hobby for me]]

I liked this chapter. It dealt more with Hermione's feeling of having her own control and to what measures she's going to take to have it. She's risking her best friends to prove that she indeed is not a little girl and can make her own decisions. That's an admirable quality, and it seems something that JKR's Hermy really would do.

It was a kiss between strangers. It was a kiss full of confusion and hurt, premature trust and secrets still untold.
That line really showed how much Hermione is acting 'against the grind.' Not only did it prove a powerful statement for Hermy, but it was powerful on it's own. If you read it a few times over, it really flows together to make something that sounds vaguely poetic.

*gasp*
Updating frequently is nothing to apologize for! If anything, you should be apologizing because your such a damn good author.
No, I take that back.
Not the good author part, but rather apologizing for it.
You should be boasting about the awesomeness that is your story.

yay kisses for malfoy!

dont apologise for writing heaps because its wonderful that you do! please keep writing so frequently!!

aww i love hermione standing up for malfoy.

great...
this is making me not want to read the last book (which I pre-ordered the first day possible... with other merch as well)
Im with "team rocket"... this is the first hp story ive read and liked (=

Now he was standing, hands on hips, offended. “I never hated you!” he said.
LMAO. Malfoy- cruel, evil, warped (well, at least in JKR's books) -Draco, with his hands on his hips like a woman. Thank you for that visual.

Anyway...back to the review.

This chapter has been the best so far. You captured Malfoy's vulnerability so well, and I "Awwed" at that way he's handling his upcoming death. That way you made him want to live for the day - is just how many people would react if they only had a limited time to live. You conquered the realistic air and turned it into something that makes so much sense.

"...I realized you were never pretty. You are beautiful.”
That line made me absolutely swoon. It was perfect. Just...perfect.

And to agree with Agony; All The Rage - That chapter did have a bit of a Stephenie Meyer-esque tone to it.

Once again, well done and I look forward to more.
Take care.

(OH, and I can't read the HP books anymore, either! I keep wanting Malfoy to go give Hermione a hug, and when he doesn't, I feel like I should be throwing the book across the room. Which I did when *sob* Sirius died.)

ah she kissed him!

and what does she think about him??
ahh! update soon.

Oh wow, that was really...I don't know, intese. It reminded me of Stephanie Meyer's writing.
You see that?
I'm comparing you to Stehphanie Meyer.
-Nudges-
How fabulous of a writer are you, eh?
:[)

holy fucking shit, this just gets better and better!!! *clapclapclap*

YOU ROCK!! unoriginal and uncreative, i know. but its late and im tired, so forgive me :P

ahh i love malfoy!
he is human in this, which makes me love it more.

I love my readers more than I love writing what they read.

That was amazing!!!!!
I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT!
-Hug attacks you-

OMG PotterSlash!

Sorry, weird friend obsession. This story is the first HP story I've read and enjoyed. Its really good!

And then I felt something, something smooth and wet trace its way up my cheek. It reached the tear and licked it. He was licking my tears. He was toying with me. Would this ever end? - Malfoy gives me the creeps majorly, and you wrote about him really well. ITs the strangest couple you could imagine but Hermione and Malfoy work so well..

I sat alone for the first time since I was a first year.
Instead of taking notes I doodled my name over and over. I drew it big, wide, small, messy, and neat. I took up the whole page with just my name. - Your setting and decriptions of isolation and lonliness were captured really well in your writing.

Its not monotonous or cliche or predictable, its written incredibly well and in all honestly I'll be waiting for more. (: