It Was Never Supposed to Be Easy - Comments

  • Trip Fontaine.

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    woohoo what a fucking awesome story!! it's really so good, I don't even know what to say!! and i subscribed--you have my mibba subscription virginity! lmao :P
    July 14th, 2007 at 02:07pm
  • king.

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    YOU ARE QUITE WELCOME!
    *tackles in hug*

    This story is exactly as I imagine Hermione's POV would be. The way she thinks and is considerate of all people is just how J.K Rowling writes her character.

    I had been to far away to see his face as he walked away, but I was sure that if I had, it would’ve broken my heart more than my heart was already broken by my friends.
    That line showed the compassion that Hermione can feel, even for someone she previously hated.
    It also opens up some doors for Hermy and Malfoy's relationship.
    *gasp*
    RELATIONSHIP!
    Speaking of which, the whole thing with Ron kind of confused me.
    I don't really know what about it confused me, I just know that it left me with: "What...?" floating around in the abyss of my mind.

    Regardless, though - this story is fantastic and I feel myself falling more in love with by the chapter.
    Update when you get the chance and take care.
    July 14th, 2007 at 01:59pm
  • jocelynplease

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    Mwahahahaha, you will just have to wait and read!
    BTW, I have 10 subscribers, that's HUGE for me. I've had like, two, at most before. I get on and I'm like {insertevilgiggle} MORE PEOPLE! EXCELLENT!
    THANKS GUYS!

    I'll update soon, promise.
    xoxo
    July 14th, 2007 at 12:36pm
  • Thoughts.

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    I think she should go back to ron.

    just my oppion!

    lol.
    great update.
    can't wait for the next chapter!
    July 14th, 2007 at 12:21pm
  • RIOT!

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    loving it.. i just got back from the movie, and well, I'm loving this story (=
    July 14th, 2007 at 11:40am
  • cai1125

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    Loved your story so far. write more :D
    July 14th, 2007 at 11:39am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    Fuck, I love the update.
    It is the best yet.
    I can't wait for more.
    DRAMIONE.
    MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    July 14th, 2007 at 10:39am
  • NoLoveLivesHere

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    haha this is so good

    we love Hermionie/Draco

    Draco has always been my favourite character thoughout

    much love!

    Scarlethere to put blackened stars andrainbows in your dreams
    July 14th, 2007 at 05:24am
  • jocelynplease

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    Geriya:
    This story is one of the best I've ever read.
    And I've read my fair share.
    To be the third (but not the last) person to tell you: This is amazingly well written. All the descriptions, grammar and paragraphing are in order.

    I was completely trapped and I could feel the panicked hand of fear gripping my heart.
    I really loved that line. It went along so well with Malfoy's own grip on Hermione's wrist. It just...fit.

    Some questions though: what year are they in? And will Voldemort or any of Harry/Malfoy's enemies be evident in this story? Will this story kind of be an alternate timeline/universe?

    The only criticism I have is to make the dialog double spaced.
    For example:
    "Harry?" He asked, his fingers circling the side of my neck.

    "Please, Draco, Please!" I felt my eyes brimming with tears. I was so alone.

    "Potter?" He asked again. "Potter..." his voice drifted off again.
    That makes it easier on the eyes.

    Love this story, it's the first Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read, and I am certainly not regretting clicking on it.
    Update when you get the chance and take care.
    I want the characters to be older. Like maybe, fifth year and up, but I don't want to feel like I have to attach them to JKR's story. What I might do is place them in a year and tell it from Hermione's POV and then follow the HP timeline. Maybe.

    I'd put them in seventh year, but as that book is coming out in a matter of days, I don't feel like I can.
    But their year will be revealed and so will any...enemies *hinthint*
    OHGODIDEA!
    the update will be so soon...like today, soon.
    July 14th, 2007 at 05:19am
  • Thoughts.

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    i really like your story!
    its amazing i was looking for good harry potter story, and i founf it!

    more soon.
    July 14th, 2007 at 01:16am
  • king.

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    This story is one of the best I've ever read.
    And I've read my fair share.
    To be the third (but not the last) person to tell you: This is amazingly well written. All the descriptions, grammar and paragraphing are in order.

    I was completely trapped and I could feel the panicked hand of fear gripping my heart.
    I really loved that line. It went along so well with Malfoy's own grip on Hermione's wrist. It just...fit.

    Some questions though: what year are they in? And will Voldemort or any of Harry/Malfoy's enemies be evident in this story? Will this story kind of be an alternate timeline/universe?

    The only criticism I have is to make the dialog double spaced.
    For example:
    "Harry?" He asked, his fingers circling the side of my neck.

    "Please, Draco, Please!" I felt my eyes brimming with tears. I was so alone.

    "Potter?" He asked again. "Potter..." his voice drifted off again.
    That makes it easier on the eyes.

    Love this story, it's the first Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read, and I am certainly not regretting clicking on it.
    Update when you get the chance and take care.
    July 13th, 2007 at 11:59pm
  • Jinx_Luckystar

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    ooooo I sorta feel sorry for Malfoy...is that normal?
    great updates
    July 13th, 2007 at 08:57pm
  • vichy

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    never say harry potter is geeky! it is totally cool.
    and i love this story.
    i would ditch my friends malfoy. he is soo cute ahh i love him.
    July 13th, 2007 at 03:02pm
  • Matt Sanders;

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    I love the update.
    It is really good.
    I can't wait for more soon.
    July 13th, 2007 at 02:22pm
  • St_Atrocity

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    oh em gee!!! (ahaha, that sounds funny)
    I loved it. XD
    July 13th, 2007 at 10:36am
  • Matt Sanders;

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    It was well written.
    I can't wait for more.
    Update soon.
    July 13th, 2007 at 06:29am
  • Fentoozler

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    That was pretty good.
    I was all =O no way! and then he kissed her and I was like ooooh.
    haha anyway well written pretty good for a first fan fic.
    O.o
    feel special...I don't read fan fics.
    July 13th, 2007 at 06:16am
  • Jinx_Luckystar

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    amazingly written
    wow Malfoy really gave me the creeps....
    update soon
    *subscribes*
    July 13th, 2007 at 05:59am
  • St_Atrocity

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    wow Clap that was really good!!! i loved it.
    July 13th, 2007 at 05:45am