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  • Call Me Moonlight

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    D: omg that was quite surprising
    May 30th, 2009 at 10:45pm
  • Call Me Moonlight

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    omg <3 i love this!
    May 30th, 2009 at 09:39pm
  • Daylight.

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    great chapter love
    i was so pissed at Zaid
    i was like
    "YOU BASTARD YOU BETTER NOT FUCKING LEAVE HIM!!!! SOMETHINGS GONNA HAPPEN AND YOU FUCKEN KNOW IT!!!!!!"
    it was great
    good job hun
    May 30th, 2009 at 08:42pm
  • My.Brutal.Romance

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    Loved! More soon!
    May 30th, 2009 at 07:18pm
  • My.Brutal.Romance

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    Loved it!
    May 29th, 2009 at 07:10pm
  • bloodyxxredxxangel

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    man...that was so....wow...and like I told you Jared read it ....and he was blown away....I don't know what to say. Its really good and the last chapter was really...um...yeah...wow you have corrupted me. Yes, Arden and Zaid are different form Zane and Adem...is not that the words themselves cause yes they are more Vulger than Zaid but the actions.....it wasn't like the first scene where he was careful it was more rough. But idk. I knew you were a great writer Phoenix but I forgot how good you were. This chapter made up for the long time without any posts.
    May 28th, 2009 at 03:18pm
  • Dragonfire

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    I love this! And to answer your question I think there are enough little differences that you can kinda tell who is Zane or Adem and who is Zaid and Arden!
    Update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 28th, 2009 at 01:50am
  • we are you

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    i love this story! and i just wanted you to know that the original song is River Flows in You by Yiruma. He's a Korean pianist and he wrote this song himself, DJ S3RL just made it techno. :)

    <33
    May 27th, 2009 at 11:49pm
  • I'd.Be.Your.Tears

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    just read this story and i love it!!
    it's a really original idea! =]
    i can't wait for the next chapter! :-D
    May 27th, 2009 at 03:38pm
  • whomever

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    I almost couldn't believe it when I checked my phone and the email said that it was this story being updated! I was so happy I almost cried!
    May 22nd, 2009 at 01:58am
  • bloodyxxredxxangel

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    that's it i'm never listening to Jared again.....this story is amazing...I can't believe it took you so long to post it up
    April 29th, 2009 at 08:17pm
  • CallMeSkittles

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    wow painful much? i love it wish my story was this good HAHA! <33 xx
    April 28th, 2009 at 02:35pm
  • Call Me Moonlight

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    i'm in love!!!!
    April 28th, 2009 at 01:13pm
  • Daylight.

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    Haha
    I love how your totally whoringout my stories
    It's great
    Btb looooovvveeeedddd this chapter
    *cough*stolemyparkscene*cough*
    Jus kidding
    But srsly
    It was a great
    April 28th, 2009 at 09:55am
  • RyleeReckage

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    That was sad i almost cried, though im happy there together again.
    Keep writing!!

    Xx---Phoebe
    April 28th, 2009 at 09:49am
  • RyleeReckage

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    This chapter was amazingly well written
    You used Russian, i love it when people do that!!! XD
    Im sad for Arden,
    Wonderful choice of name by the way, Zaids kool!!

    Xx---Phoebe
    April 26th, 2009 at 04:53pm
  • Kite Flyin'

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    Nadia seems pretty cool.
    April 26th, 2009 at 02:26pm
  • CallMeSkittles

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    i would never hate you :D no matter what happens lol
    i love this story
    x
    April 26th, 2009 at 12:50pm
  • adrenaline .

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    this is soo adorable, i love it!
    can't wait to read more!
    April 26th, 2009 at 12:20am
  • Daylight.

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    Oh man
    Wonderful chapter
    I was so happy
    It as soooooo amazingly good
    April 25th, 2009 at 11:13pm