great chapter love i was so pissed at Zaid i was like "YOU BASTARD YOU BETTER NOT FUCKING LEAVE HIM!!!! SOMETHINGS GONNA HAPPEN AND YOU FUCKEN KNOW IT!!!!!!" it was great good job hun
man...that was so....wow...and like I told you Jared read it ....and he was blown away....I don't know what to say. Its really good and the last chapter was really...um...yeah...wow you have corrupted me. Yes, Arden and Zaid are different form Zane and Adem...is not that the words themselves cause yes they are more Vulger than Zaid but the actions.....it wasn't like the first scene where he was careful it was more rough. But idk. I knew you were a great writer Phoenix but I forgot how good you were. This chapter made up for the long time without any posts.
I love this! And to answer your question I think there are enough little differences that you can kinda tell who is Zane or Adem and who is Zaid and Arden! Update soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love this story! and i just wanted you to know that the original song is River Flows in You by Yiruma. He's a Korean pianist and he wrote this song himself, DJ S3RL just made it techno. :)
Haha I love how your totally whoringout my stories It's great Btb looooovvveeeedddd this chapter *cough*stolemyparkscene*cough* Jus kidding But srsly It was a great
This chapter was amazingly well written You used Russian, i love it when people do that!!! XD Im sad for Arden, Wonderful choice of name by the way, Zaids kool!!