*shakes head* it was a nice chapter a bit demented but hey its you what do you expect.....anyway...you wench you added tommi in...ugh...whatev....can't wait for what you sick little mind thinks of next
oh my god...I was expecting this story to make me sad or mad but I spent most of my time laughing....eccepcially when I noticed the guys were in it....laughing at what Zaid did but still in shock at how rough he was...man I have a twisted sense of humor *shakes head* but dude I love your story
So first off i'd like to make a request: Shut up! This story is great! Don't second guess it. I particularly like when Arden kicked Jimmy's ass while cussing him out in Russian the same time.
But yeah, i love it so far. I feel like the overall idea is more like actual book material. Most love stories on here are so incredibly typical it kills me. I love the twist you put on this! Keep writing, I can't wait to see what happens next.
jeez....pheonix nice chapter.....that was so funny the even though somethings you wrote reminded me of things we did like putting eyeliner of mark...hehehe....and the russian made me laugh. I absolutly love this story *head meets desk* damn i'm reading slash....what have you done to me...lol....I still love this