Morse Code Messages - Comments

I wish the daydream this piece
of fiction puts me in would never
in and I could feel what it's like
to fall in love and miss out on
all the hurt.
<3

I know I'm one to talk but...
CHILD, WHEN YOU GON' UPDATE THIS.

WHEN IS THIS COMING BACK..

WHEN?!

Alright, this story, I'd expect to find it in a bookstore. When you finish it, I think you consider sending it to a publisher, you know? Unless, of course, writing is just a pensieve, and you don't want to publish anything. But, yeah, I can picture myself purchasing this from a small bookstore in a southern coastal town the curling up in a chair on the beach with it and reading about Mickey's misfortunes.

And for the record- I don't like Sock as Mickey's crush. I like James. But, of course, Mickey can't just magically like James, cuz that would ruin the entire story. *Sigh*

Erica Lynne Reviews likes the group of girls, except for their behavior (Minus Mickey...mostly)

I just started reading and I'm in love (:
I hate her friends, they're all bitches (well Brallie, Davie, and that dick Sock). What's their problem, god, they piss me off...
Update soon (: And I don't know if it's too late, but I imagine her with blond hair too. Hey, did she just have her period in front of James and Brallie?

I love this story.
You are a fanstastic writer.

This is so amazing.
Poor Mickey though, you're writing skills are actually rediculously amazing. :]
I love how real the characters feel, although she really needs to get some new nice friends xox

one word
love

This story is magical. You write brilliantly. I love how you explain everything in so much detail.

I feel so bad for Mickey, it's not even funny. Her 'friends' make me so mad. She hasn't even done anything but try to fit in with them. Peer pressure really is a horrible thing.

Anyway, sorry that I didn't have something constructive to say or anything like that, but I thought I would just let you know how much I truly love this story.

Oh my gosh! I absolutely adore this story! It's very well written, and has a story line that keeps you hooked. I can't wait for more, and if James was a nice guy, He'd help her out with things :) AND she should fall for him :P

nicotine dream.:

awe! poor sweetheart!
that's embarrassing.
especially since i like this james fellow.

What nicotine dream said.
Poor thing, I feel more sorry for her because Braille most likely saw rather than James. He seems like the sort of guy that would understand, hopefully.

Also, I can't believe I didn't notice you had a new story, I must go and read it then.

Oh god, I got embarrassed for Mickey D:
Another brilliant update :arms:
I'm off to check out your new story :}

Oh no.
Oh no.

Oh! Poor Mickey!

I haven't read this awesomeness in like 68430679386793 years. But hello again. :cute:.

You haven't failed me yet. :arms:.

awe! poor sweetheart!
that's embarrassing.
especially since i like this james fellow.

.. new story?
have i told you lately that i adore you?
cause, really, i do.

This is such a great story.
One of the few on mibba that is both orginal and realistic.

subscribed. (:

Wow.

I love this story.

I want to marry it.

It's just so perfect. :arms:

I thought the part about wanting a white room/world was pure brilliance, basically. It kind of seems like, she wants people to notice her and pay attention her so much so that even if it's her mistakes, that's okay. And when she told her that she slept with Sock, because she wanted the attention.
Anyway, I just basically blabbed on about nothing.

I think this is going perfectly, I don't think you should change anything!

“There may not be a God, but there’s someone up there.”

“I said that,” I replied lamely. “But I highly doubt that.”

“Why do you doubt that?” Davie asked, running a hand through her hair.

“Because whomever is up there gave you pink walls when He knew you wanted white ones.”

fabulous line. i loved this part.

and in regards to the religious comment, i'm catholic and i wasn't offended in the least. many religious people have to do something against their morals because they're actors or writers or poets. it's a form of expression; don't apologize for it.

incredible update. waiting anxiously for the next chapter.

I reallyyy like this (: