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Davie is such a manipulative bitch! :/
She's just like one of my friends ¬_¬

But, anyway! :cute:
Your updates are always amazing, and this one was no exception. You are a brilliant writer.

i absolutely love this story!
so i subscribed!

but i hate hate hate hate Davie. :(
especially in chapter6.
she's such a meanie to her own friend!
goshhhhhh..

update soon !

<3!!!

Just before I began to read this chapter I realised the chapter titles were from a Death Cab song :D
Oh they are so very exceptional, just like you and this!

I very much dislike Davie, she seems like a back stabbing cow really.

How, oh master, do you write such masterpieces?
You are truly brilliant.

OH YEAH!
Wow.I just sounded like the Kool-Aide man.
Well,it's an update!So I can be weird and overly happy if I want.
It was a good one.I can't wait for the next update.I'm curious about what will happen next.

Ooh. Sounds exciting! Update more!

First off, your layout is adorable and your chapter titles are beautiful. :weird

This story is just amazing, tbh. You don't describe the characters like most writers do. It's unique, and I love it. I really feel like you let your readers know your characters. Aw, it's just lovely. I could ramble on about how much I love your characters and why, but it seems a bit pointless. :tehe:

I love how original and realistic this story is, and I'm excited to see what's going to happen with Mickey and her friends. :XD

YES YOU FINALLY UPDATED.

The fact that Mickey doesn't fit in makes me like this story A LOT. I know exactly how it feels when you're still young, on the brink of chilhood and being a teenager. You want to keep playing innocent games like hide-and-go-seek, but all of your friends are out drinking and hooking up with boys, and all you can do is watch and be left behind...It pretty much sucks to be left out like that. And I can totally empathize with Mickey.

Anyway, I absolutely adore this line for some reason:
"The giggle had turned into a lacing of voices."

But yeah, basically you need to keep up this story. DO NOT DELETE IT or I will be sad It would be really nice to read a story like this, since it's so realistic and it focuses on that awkward stage in life when you're still wondering who the fuck you really are. And I would like to see how Mickey can survive this summer :]

Nice story.
You're a really good writer. (:

Update I say!:D
I love this!

I'm really loving this story. And even though I think this is just going to be an 'OMG, I love this story' comments, I do sincerely mean it. It just has...the 'it' factor, if y'know what I mean. And all the characters are believeable and I love Key as the main character. And I love the name Key and Braille and Fanny. They're such imagnitive (pretty sure I spelt that wrong...) names. Umh, that's all :)

I would leave a longer comment, but i'm revising.
I thought it was so beautifully written and never got uninteresting.

This, like everything else you write, is amazing! :D
I can't wait for more, they have such interesting personalities.

I couldn't go on for a few days because I was swamped with school work.When I come back,I see three new chapters to read.Yay!Really,your work is amazing.I'm hooked.

i love this story : ]
maybe because i live in miami and it feels like you're kindof writing about home?
but it's written really amazing. like i can see your story being published as a book or something.
i can't wait to read the rest of it

Ok. I'm going to take a moment and rant about how amazing this is.

1) I love Key because sh is not a Mary Sue. I can connect to her really well, actually, because when I was 15 I had a group of friends who were way ahead of me in terms of drinking/smoking/boys, and I always felt pressured to follow their example. And some people might complain and be all like, "No Key, don't say yes because of peer pressure!" but in reality, saying yes to peer pressure is exactly what 15 year olds do. And that makes Key a believable character. It's easy to empathize with her because I'm sure I'm not the only one who felt like this as a 15 year old.

2) All of the character's personalities are amazing. And I love their names, First there's Davies, who's the rich girl; Louie, the adventurous and boy-loving girl; Fanny, the annoying "Karen" of the group (if you've ever heard Dane Cook you know what I'm talking about haha); and then there's Braille, the exotic and beautiful one. And you sneak in so many small facts about them that makes them so believable.

3) The mere fact that it takes place in the 50s makes me love it even more. And it's in Florida. Sweeet.

Ok (: I'm done ranting.

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I really like the story, beautifully simple, and even though this has very little to do with the story, or so I think, the image above the titling is very pretty. And as a note, it's accept, not except. Except means not that one, another similar word is 'but'. Eg. I like her, except the fact that she is so picky. Type thing, you know? Sorry, it was just kind of bugging me. Stupendous story none the less.

Oh, never mind, I found it!
Thanks. :cute:
:arms:

I really like the story, beautifully simple, and even though this has very little to do with the story, or so I think, the image above the titling is very pretty. And as a note, it's accept, not except. Except means not that one, another similar word is 'but'. Eg. I like her, except the fact that she is so picky. Type thing, you know? Sorry, it was just kind of bugging me. Stupendous story none the less.

EDIT: The comment before this was utterly stupid on my part, so I apologize. -facepalm-

Anyway, I'm really starting to enjoy this story even more than I did before (if that's possible). I adore your writing style. Actually, I try - and I try very hard - to write like this: in a careless, free way, but I always think I come off too strong. But, you! Unbelieveable description, but not too much as to get on my nerves.

The characters seem so realistic. Mickey kind of reminds me how I was when I first got into high school. It's an odd experience, yes, and you've protrayed it beautifully, telling about every little that makes it exciting, yet frightening. (By the way, I love all your characters' names. They all sound so... I don't know, fun! Lame word, yes, but I'm not kidding. :XD)

Can't wait for more, love. Really lookin' forward to it.

I love this. The characters are so interesting. And it's easy to connect with Key, since I've had friends who were a bit more...outgoing with the boys.