HOLY CRAP!! I love this story. Its very interesting and I am so hooked. I.am.subscribing. So now you have no choice but to update. Haha. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!!!
I kid you not, I just read the entire story in under an hour. It is FANTASTIC!!!!! The setting is great, the plot, everything is amazing. The only thing that could be worked on would be grammar and spelling. But hey, no one is perfect.
Keep up the good work!!! Update quick! PLEASE!!!! (:
That must be so awful for Khenti. He's more or less stuck between a rock and a hard place and as much as he tries to fight it, he really can't go anywhere...