An Ancient Nightmare - Comments

even thought i saw that coming i couldnt help be awed
i like it!
more please!

dont wait too long to update or ill loose the flow of the story good luck loved the update

awwwww i feel so bad for her!
great update! do it again soon please!!!

Well now there really isn't any reason for her to stay. Her father is dead and Neva is free...

How very sad! Why do they like to torment her so much? It isn't fair!

I am in love with your story! :D
And I can't wait for the next chapter.
You are an amazing writer, too!

this is fantastic and amazing and i love it!! it's refreshing because its different.. i am so excited for the next update, like, holy cow!! i definitely read all 32 chapters today, and now i'm itching for more!! lol.. it's amazing, and keep up the good work!! :)

ooooo!! interesting..dum dum dum

this is so different than the resttt
please update soon

OMG IVE NEVER BEEN MENTIONED IN SOMEONES AUTHERNOTE BEFORE!! IM HONORED! thanx. ill be waiting for the next gripping enstallment!

thanks for the shout out :D you rock!

and it makes me a little sad to know that Khenti is involved in all of this stuff...he's been so good and it's all been a lie :( just as long as he figures it out i'm ok with it though

oh oh oh...
:D

you got my mind wrapped in your story!

keep it going..

your updates are always good. =]

look forward to the next chapter. :)

Oh now things are getting real good ;)

oh wow! My mind was on his son
who was attempting to kill him not his mistress..
brilliant update! :D
im too jumpy for the nxt one

i love this story!!!! SO SO SO much! i was oh sooo happy when you updatedd!! UPDATE SOON!

still loving it coant wait till next week

AHAHA im glad she got back at him lol i still love this story and will be waiting in antisipation for the next chapter.

Woah! I LOVE this!
I'm a big fan if Egyptology, and I was looking for and origonal story, becuse they arebpretty hard to come by these days...
And I must say that this is seriously an Amazing story.
I was actually thinking not 3 minutes before I found this that I should write an egyptian story, because I love Egypt and no one really does stories form exotic countries!
Needless to say I was enamored to find just what I was looking for. It has just the right ballance of romance and adventure!
Keep up the AMAZING work!

i love this story!
is it bad to say that i can really see a movie happening..i can see an awesome movie coming from this story!! :D