An Ancient Nightmare - Comments

YAY!!! great chapter! i liked reading about how he got burned by touching her. serves him right. =]

well my question was answered (:
cant wait for the next update!!!

Boo Yah!! Hehe the Greats did something right! I think...

Thanks guys!

i think you are very talented to pull off a story like this wothout making it cheezy! Your amazing! i hope to see more updated soon, ill be waiting in anticapation! :)

Wow, this story is amazing and very unique.
I especially love the setting and well bascailly
EVERYTHING in your story. I can't wait for
your next update! You got my mine racing with
questions!!! Especially the last part when Kamen
came pounding at her door! Didnt her curser agree to
help her?? so why is Kamen there?
Or did the curse not work on Kamen???
I guess i got to wait and see :)

Uh oh...Kamen...I smell trouble

Thanks! I will, check sometime tonight.

uh oh.....=]

GREAT STORY!!! update soon plz.

cliffhanger! NOOOOO
but wants more!
soon right :D

o.O What was that all about? I'm not so sure that I like Dendara. She seems to have a bit of an ulterior motive...

adorable chapter!
LOVE IT!
more soon?!

Oooh scandalous! I love it! Rameses was a bit out of line to talk to her like he did. But still...he's better than Kamen.

this is extraordinary and fascinating!!!!
i love it!
more please!

I just started reading this story and it is amazing. Good work.

Thanks dark eyes ;-)

I think Khenti is my favorite part of the story :) I love the storyline too though.

Hooray for number 25! Excellent! and uh oh...what is going to happen now that one of the Greats is dead? I can't wait for more!

Amazing!
more soon please? :D

i luv this story i havent read anything like this before! luv it update soon